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5/11/2020 c1 Warwolf192
Like it
3/2/2016 c1 Ghost
This was really sweet :,)
1/1/2012 c1 22yugiohyaoiloverandsonicfangirl
LOVE IT!
12/11/2011 c1 4X-xx-SugarBerries-xx-X
You do realize that lions don't kiss each other on the lips? they lick each other and they don't hug, they only nuzzle.
12/3/2011 c1 You wish you knew
Too much stuttering. Also, Lion King characters were meant to be more realistic - they don't kiss, they lick or nuzzle each other. As a last point, try to keep to one lion's perspective, you'll find writing less cardboard that way.
12/2/2011 c1 Jonny2b
To tired to log in.

Ok very good with the eyes. As always you have the beter fluf and love.
12/2/2011 c1 1Jimmy8492
Very good work. That was really nice :)
12/2/2011 c1 2Simba's Hommie
Man, you like nalas emerald turqouise eyes, dont you? I like em too. It seems every time simba mentions nala they come up. This is a pretty good one shot and I hope you continue your story.
12/2/2011 c1 7x0xalexis8
that would have been a good part in the movie!

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