for The Newest Challenger5/18 c4 AadenFo
You should honestly add the comedy tag to this story. I dont really like reading comedy stories, and this one reads exactly like how one would be.
You should honestly add the comedy tag to this story. I dont really like reading comedy stories, and this one reads exactly like how one would be.
5/18 c3 AadenFo
Ya see this is part of why I dont like how Naruto is portrayed in some fanfic. Its like a toss up of whether he is turned into a sociopath, or whether he acts like a dog to anyone who meets him. Someone breaks into his house, has their pet attack him, and then causes him to be chased by 15 ninjas who are out to kill. And theres no sort of resentment? That is not a human reaction. I do not care how you THINK Naruto is. Having no sort of grudge after all of that is just inhuman. Its such a shame too. A potential story witb 800k words, yet its just another story of Naruto being pushed around with a smile on his face. Just going with whatever people want of him, like a damn vegetable
Ya see this is part of why I dont like how Naruto is portrayed in some fanfic. Its like a toss up of whether he is turned into a sociopath, or whether he acts like a dog to anyone who meets him. Someone breaks into his house, has their pet attack him, and then causes him to be chased by 15 ninjas who are out to kill. And theres no sort of resentment? That is not a human reaction. I do not care how you THINK Naruto is. Having no sort of grudge after all of that is just inhuman. Its such a shame too. A potential story witb 800k words, yet its just another story of Naruto being pushed around with a smile on his face. Just going with whatever people want of him, like a damn vegetable
5/18 c1 AadenFo
I swear I will crash out if this guy didnt improve a single bit in 3 years, and only kept his skills as sharp as they were when he was 12. I already dislike that age considering I have no idea how he is gonna get sage mode, if at all.
I swear I will crash out if this guy didnt improve a single bit in 3 years, and only kept his skills as sharp as they were when he was 12. I already dislike that age considering I have no idea how he is gonna get sage mode, if at all.
4/11 c61 Gilgamesh50
Im still waiting on sage mode cuz if he can summon the frogs he can be reverse summoned too, or the real kcm mode, the orange/yellow cloak in the war
Im still waiting on sage mode cuz if he can summon the frogs he can be reverse summoned too, or the real kcm mode, the orange/yellow cloak in the war
4/8 c38 Gilgamesh50
Great Chapter bit i kinda wished they returned to the elemental nations and after the war and at the end of their last battle they return here with well all their powers unlocked and all
Great Chapter bit i kinda wished they returned to the elemental nations and after the war and at the end of their last battle they return here with well all their powers unlocked and all
4/7 c22 Gilgamesh50
Honestly the reason i hate sakura(from naruto verse) is because her love for sasuke doesnt make sense i can give it a pass in the naruto series were they are still 12-14 years old but oater on she still didnt learn idc about the manga version ive heard and seem app version and its still “sasuke shouldve killed her/sasori shouldve killeder her” for me also the same goes for oarin again from naruto verse
Honestly the reason i hate sakura(from naruto verse) is because her love for sasuke doesnt make sense i can give it a pass in the naruto series were they are still 12-14 years old but oater on she still didnt learn idc about the manga version ive heard and seem app version and its still “sasuke shouldve killed her/sasori shouldve killeder her” for me also the same goes for oarin again from naruto verse
3/27 c13 
2DBoblivion
as cool as naruto wanting to get along with kyuubi is it seems hes only seeing it as a victim
he hasn't even asked it why it attacked the village
2DBoblivionas cool as naruto wanting to get along with kyuubi is it seems hes only seeing it as a victim
he hasn't even asked it why it attacked the village
3/22 c9 DBoblivion
im suprised he could control his kyuubi claw well enough to only cut the clothing. that was a close one
the seal. is a genuine issue though. without the training he did with jiraiya, yamato around , the toads and the key or killer bee island its gonna be very consequential
im suprised he could control his kyuubi claw well enough to only cut the clothing. that was a close one
the seal. is a genuine issue though. without the training he did with jiraiya, yamato around , the toads and the key or killer bee island its gonna be very consequential
3/20 c6 DBoblivion
I hope wrestling as a whole doesn't get clowned on cuz that was embarrassing even if I knew it was up against naruto.
The last street fighter fic I read had a big gap between most of the adult fighters and teens so this outcome of the chapter definitely surprised me
I hope wrestling as a whole doesn't get clowned on cuz that was embarrassing even if I knew it was up against naruto.
The last street fighter fic I read had a big gap between most of the adult fighters and teens so this outcome of the chapter definitely surprised me
3/17 c12 Gilgamesh50
Man kurama’s residue powers being used so freely is kinda tricky cuz like everytime naruto uses it its a risk a bad guy can idk use the residue?
Man kurama’s residue powers being used so freely is kinda tricky cuz like everytime naruto uses it its a risk a bad guy can idk use the residue?
3/17 c12 Gilgamesh50
Best girl cun li! Idc if she is way older than naruto you have to make em a couple. If u dont plan on a harem just add her as the inly one idc
Best girl cun li! Idc if she is way older than naruto you have to make em a couple. If u dont plan on a harem just add her as the inly one idc