
6/25/2013 c6 alicedinozzo
I want to read these stories so much, but when it's not finished it sucks...seriously...if someone is going to start something, finish it...going forward I'll write down the authors name and know not to bother...thanks for the cliffhanger...
I want to read these stories so much, but when it's not finished it sucks...seriously...if someone is going to start something, finish it...going forward I'll write down the authors name and know not to bother...thanks for the cliffhanger...
3/5/2012 c6 Mrs obsession
Hey this is a really good story so keep it up! I wanna see what happens to Sydney!
Hey this is a really good story so keep it up! I wanna see what happens to Sydney!
1/2/2012 c3 Mountaineer83
my favorite chapter so far ! this is a short one but it's really powerful ! I'll be there for the next one !
bye
my favorite chapter so far ! this is a short one but it's really powerful ! I'll be there for the next one !
bye
12/18/2011 c1
209domina tempore
*awe*
I LOVE how you set this up! The ticking clock had me on the edge of my seat waiting for something to blow up, but what happened was just as explosive as an actual bomb. Sloane at the end was so very creepy, and everyone was written quite in character. I can't wait to see where you're going with this.
..and now I have to find the story that this is a sequel to and read that too. ;)

*awe*
I LOVE how you set this up! The ticking clock had me on the edge of my seat waiting for something to blow up, but what happened was just as explosive as an actual bomb. Sloane at the end was so very creepy, and everyone was written quite in character. I can't wait to see where you're going with this.
..and now I have to find the story that this is a sequel to and read that too. ;)