for That's the Weasley Way10/20/2019 c1 Guest
More please
More please
8/6/2013 c1 Vanessa
Reading this makes me imagine it was written by a drunk William Shatner. Your placement of commas makes absolutely no sense ninety percent of the time. Your spelling is atrocious. You can't even use the right "its". The storyline, once you get past the spelling/grammar/punctuation mistakes, isn't terrible. Mediocre, perhaps, but not terrible.
Moral of the story- if you want to continue writing, I would suggest using spellcheck and calming down with all the commas. If that's too difficult, get a beta. Having someone beta your stories might help the flow of the story as well. Before you get your knickers in a twist and take my advice personally, think about it; your story could be an absolute masterpiece that would go completely undiscovered because no one would see past all of the mistakes. Generally, writing well is not just something people are born doing- you have to work at it. I offer you this advice: don't give up now if you truly enjoy it, but make an effort to improve.
Reading this makes me imagine it was written by a drunk William Shatner. Your placement of commas makes absolutely no sense ninety percent of the time. Your spelling is atrocious. You can't even use the right "its". The storyline, once you get past the spelling/grammar/punctuation mistakes, isn't terrible. Mediocre, perhaps, but not terrible.
Moral of the story- if you want to continue writing, I would suggest using spellcheck and calming down with all the commas. If that's too difficult, get a beta. Having someone beta your stories might help the flow of the story as well. Before you get your knickers in a twist and take my advice personally, think about it; your story could be an absolute masterpiece that would go completely undiscovered because no one would see past all of the mistakes. Generally, writing well is not just something people are born doing- you have to work at it. I offer you this advice: don't give up now if you truly enjoy it, but make an effort to improve.
8/10/2012 c1 Moi
That sucked, you can't spell, nor can you write.
That sucked, you can't spell, nor can you write.
12/19/2011 c1 
67kci47
I wouldn't put any A/N's right in the middle of the story, it kind of detracts from what you're trying to say. Could be a cute concept with a bit of editing.
67kci47I wouldn't put any A/N's right in the middle of the story, it kind of detracts from what you're trying to say. Could be a cute concept with a bit of editing.
12/8/2011 c1 1SqDancerKH
Might I suggest the use of spell check? I didn't read more than three lines because I simply could not get past the spelling and grammar errors.
1SqDancerKHMight I suggest the use of spell check? I didn't read more than three lines because I simply could not get past the spelling and grammar errors.
12/7/2011 c1 whothefuckcares7890
There were quite a few spelling mistakes, awful punctuation, and it was incredibly unrealistic.
nice try though :)
There were quite a few spelling mistakes, awful punctuation, and it was incredibly unrealistic.
nice try though :)