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6Alysia Of The Pen
Very sweet oneshot. I liked Sophia and the honesty of her thoughts about her own appearance.
6Alysia Of The PenVery sweet oneshot. I liked Sophia and the honesty of her thoughts about her own appearance.
7/5/2013 c1 6Carlisle Fan 22
Aw that is so sweet. I loved your character. Great job on this story. You should be proud of yourself. :D
6Carlisle Fan 22Aw that is so sweet. I loved your character. Great job on this story. You should be proud of yourself. :D
2/17/2013 c1 14LalaithElerrina
Very good! It reminds me of the meeting between Quazimodo and Madellaine in the second Hunchback Movie.
One little thing- the word "Okay" meaning, cool, fine, alright, I'm good with that, I'm healthy, etc. didn't come into use until the mid 1850s. Quazimodo lived around the late 1400s.
Otherwise, very sweet story. I look forward reading what happens next.
14LalaithElerrinaVery good! It reminds me of the meeting between Quazimodo and Madellaine in the second Hunchback Movie.
One little thing- the word "Okay" meaning, cool, fine, alright, I'm good with that, I'm healthy, etc. didn't come into use until the mid 1850s. Quazimodo lived around the late 1400s.
Otherwise, very sweet story. I look forward reading what happens next.
7/15/2012 c1 Kyle
What a minute! That's it? Don't tell me that's all there is! :( Why is it the fanfics with good character flow and appropriate pacing wind up being the ones that fall apart while the crappy fanfics get 200 reviews that consist nothing but "Update more!" or "I luv this!"?
Worst yet some reviews only consist of chat speak all together.
What a minute! That's it? Don't tell me that's all there is! :( Why is it the fanfics with good character flow and appropriate pacing wind up being the ones that fall apart while the crappy fanfics get 200 reviews that consist nothing but "Update more!" or "I luv this!"?
Worst yet some reviews only consist of chat speak all together.
4/11/2012 c1 Jacqueline of Notre Dame
Ooh! I like! Don't stop now please; I want to see where this is going. Your characterization is really good. Not just anyone can nail Quasi's personality. Keep writing, k? Oh, and thank you for staying away from yaoi. A religious cathedral in 1400-1500 France would have never approved. To be honest, yaoi isn't my style either. After my first anime, Kuroshitsuji, there was enough fanservice to last me a lifetime!
Ooh! I like! Don't stop now please; I want to see where this is going. Your characterization is really good. Not just anyone can nail Quasi's personality. Keep writing, k? Oh, and thank you for staying away from yaoi. A religious cathedral in 1400-1500 France would have never approved. To be honest, yaoi isn't my style either. After my first anime, Kuroshitsuji, there was enough fanservice to last me a lifetime!
3/11/2012 c1 dreamdwellerina
I hate to disappoint you, but this story isn't great, or even good. It's...AMAZING. Seriously, I saw the whole story in my head and I was just like awed at how beautiful it was. I understand you don't to go anywhere with it, but this story alone was magnificent in itself. Thank you :]
I hate to disappoint you, but this story isn't great, or even good. It's...AMAZING. Seriously, I saw the whole story in my head and I was just like awed at how beautiful it was. I understand you don't to go anywhere with it, but this story alone was magnificent in itself. Thank you :]
1/31/2012 c1 The-Dark-Love-Writer
i looooooooooooooooovvvvved it! 3 3 3 please continue it :) maybe when there older or you could do them growing up together or whatever just please continue! 3 3
i looooooooooooooooovvvvved it! 3 3 3 please continue it :) maybe when there older or you could do them growing up together or whatever just please continue! 3 3
1/18/2012 c1 43lilgenious
I really enjoyed this story. I really love Notre-Dame de Paris, I also like the characters. This was very well done! But I have a question to ask you... one thing that really confused me and made me laugh.
French women are not pretty? *Stares down at self* I am very self conscious now:P The Cathedral is more than beautiful, it is stunning! I seen it all the time when I went to Paris... though I know a lot more about Reims Cathedral :-)
Great chapter! I demand a sequel!
43lilgeniousI really enjoyed this story. I really love Notre-Dame de Paris, I also like the characters. This was very well done! But I have a question to ask you... one thing that really confused me and made me laugh.
French women are not pretty? *Stares down at self* I am very self conscious now:P The Cathedral is more than beautiful, it is stunning! I seen it all the time when I went to Paris... though I know a lot more about Reims Cathedral :-)
Great chapter! I demand a sequel!
12/6/2011 c1 28Imagi77
That was SO BEAUTIFUL! I was at awe through out the entire thing! And your description of Quaismodo's voice as a soft bell's just fit so perfectly. My heart melted! Sophia, my do I adore her, the way you characterized her was simply...perfection!
Quasimodo! I could just picture him perfectly, his mannerisms, his movements!
Oh, I loved this so much! It got me so excited!
28Imagi77That was SO BEAUTIFUL! I was at awe through out the entire thing! And your description of Quaismodo's voice as a soft bell's just fit so perfectly. My heart melted! Sophia, my do I adore her, the way you characterized her was simply...perfection!
Quasimodo! I could just picture him perfectly, his mannerisms, his movements!
Oh, I loved this so much! It got me so excited!