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2/10/2015 c1 1LunarCatNinja
I would love it if this was continued. Seems like it has a LOT of potential.
11/23/2013 c1 2Raven Iris
i think it should continue. it's really good but in my opinion the ending was a little to sudden...Lancer's decision was to sudden and open-ended to be an ending in my opinion, so yeah i think it should continue.
11/14/2013 c1 Dragonscorch
I personally think this would do better to stay a one-shot. A continuation wouldn't do it justice. Maybe if you worded it right...

Anyway, great job! :)
3/16/2013 c1 1crazygalxx
continue pls
2/22/2013 c1 3ghost-of-phantom
amazing! are you going to post more essay or lancer danny stories cus i love em !
10/14/2012 c1 Guest
Great story :) but how is it off topic?
12/11/2011 c1 5Alicia of the Temptation
This is quite interesting. However, I must say, Lancer is a teacher, and as a teacher, there is certain protocol. I understand this is not only fiction, but your work of fiction - your baby. Possibly, if you write a sequel, you can incorporate more serious outlooks. However, wonderful job of showing Danny's thoughts on the afterlife.
12/8/2011 c1 19Call me Mad
I would love to see this continued. Interesting insite.
12/7/2011 c1 26XxXNightcoreQueenXxX
nice! X3
12/7/2011 c1 9BeachCat
Hmmmmm... Go for it. Let's see where you take it.
12/7/2011 c1 ArbitraryMortal
I also had the same idea that ghosts are there own speices. Danny's paper was easy to understand like mines. like it
12/7/2011 c1 2IceDragon19
That was good. I think that maybe you should continue it, maybe another chapter or two, and make it into a two-shot/three-shot sort of thing. Otherwise, it's amazing.

~icedragon
12/7/2011 c1 2SailorSea
Awesome job plz continue
12/7/2011 c1 15tsukinopen
good point, death is when functions that count as life cease

ghosts in danny phantom they do seem alive

and eternal life is well no death, wonder if that's life
12/7/2011 c1 18The Half-Blood Guardian
I like this, if that means anything to you. I think It'd be cool if you continued this with more chapters :)
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