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11/24/2019 c11 Guest
Definitely liked the book and wouldn't mind if u did a sequel of this book it's really good so I'm sure if u did do a sequel it be just as good as this one if not even better but whether u did a sequel or start another book I'm sure it'll still be good hope if u do decide to another book it's of Benny Rodriguez of course with a little twist being Phillip's older sister or something like that
5/9/2013 c11 1Mikaela Hopeeeeee
OMG! Please write another one!
1/25/2013 c11 6Mrs. Ace Merrill
I loved this :)
11/11/2012 c11 Peace and Long Life
great story
10/14/2012 c11 Bookish Vibes
SEQUEL!
9/23/2012 c11 9Spirit of the Blue Jay
Sequel please! Also I love this story.
9/19/2012 c10 10BeeWonderland
Please tell me that's not the end! Please! Please! Please! Tell me that's not the end! There has to be a sequel! You have to make one! You cant just end it like that!
9/2/2012 c11 4Peppermint Butler
ok Jam i want to hear ur ideas
9/2/2012 c11 sweetpdea
SEQUAL! AND NEW STORY!
9/1/2012 c11 2hockeychick19
i wouldnt mind a sequel but if u wanna do a completely new sandlot story, then do that 2...id read it either way if its about benny
8/17/2012 c10 sweetpdea
IT CANT BE OVER!1
8/16/2012 c10 hockeychick19
great story! sad it's over...good job writing it!
8/15/2012 c10 QueenV.V.theWild
Great story. Lov eit all the way. Sa dit ended. Love how Amy writes 'taken by amy' how cute.
7/5/2012 c8 Guest
You're pretty on point with spelling and grammar, and what not, but maybe you could make the story a little more in depth? Or descriptive? (Not that your writing now isn't fantastic, just a little improvement) Also, now that Benny and Amy are going out, you should put them in their first date in a bit ;) Maybe a small outing to the diner? Or a date to REAL baseball game together? Or just something romantic, like a night under the stars in the treehouse... (Cheesy enough yet? Lol) Keep in mind: Before you throw in a bunch of conflict, you'll need to make the story seem like everything's going great, and then fill in some plot twisters, which is why I suggest putting in Benny and Amy's first date... The conflict can be between Amy and her mother, or Amy and Lisa and the other girls, or even an internal fight between Benny and Amy! :O haha, surprise me! I also liked one reviewer's suggestion of having Smalls chase after her for a change... I can really see Amy developing a deep friendship with him.

You're doing great so far! Keep up the good work, and don't forget those plot twists! ;) OR that date... I look forward to it! Update soon!
7/5/2012 c9 Guest
OHMIGOSH! Okay, you should know right now that I never write reviews, so you should feel very special right now! Haha, but really, this is a great take on the Sandlot story, and I can't describe how happy it makes me that Benny and Amy are FINALLY going out! The story line is very intriguing, and the characters are very... Well, in character! I'd definitely catagorize this story in the...mmmm... Top 5 Sandlot stories :D

My only issues? Just some constructive criticism: You're pretty good with s
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