for Team Jinchuuriki: Village Hidden in the Darkness4/18/2012 c10 
2Haise Kaneki
i love this story warflower
it is amazing how you like my story and your one is so amazing
2Haise Kanekii love this story warflower
it is amazing how you like my story and your one is so amazing
4/16/2012 c9 IRAssault
I like this story so far, I always enjoy reading a good slaughter fest in a story like the one in chapter 8. Other than some minor grammar errors this story shows great promise and I hope to read more soon.
Also, you mentioned Hinata as Naruto's girlfriend, will that come into play in the story? If so when, sooner or later? Thanks.
I like this story so far, I always enjoy reading a good slaughter fest in a story like the one in chapter 8. Other than some minor grammar errors this story shows great promise and I hope to read more soon.
Also, you mentioned Hinata as Naruto's girlfriend, will that come into play in the story? If so when, sooner or later? Thanks.
4/16/2012 c9 TigrezzTail
Oh, that is just too good! Unfortunately, most of the flamers I've come across don't necessarily seem to be of the more intelligent type, therefore incapable of using many if not most of these rules. They're just the kind of people that want to be nasty.
Oh, that is just too good! Unfortunately, most of the flamers I've come across don't necessarily seem to be of the more intelligent type, therefore incapable of using many if not most of these rules. They're just the kind of people that want to be nasty.
4/16/2012 c1 jojo the bean man
lady you've got great taste! reading now!
lady you've got great taste! reading now!
4/12/2012 c8 Codename-ShadowFox
They are delightfully psychotic aren't they? Like I always say can't spell slaughter without laughter. Anyway I woke up 20 minutes ago and I get to read about a big ol' bloodbath... It's gonna be a good day =D. Great job once again, mother was definately pleased and I guess I need to go finish chapter 4 for my story now.
They are delightfully psychotic aren't they? Like I always say can't spell slaughter without laughter. Anyway I woke up 20 minutes ago and I get to read about a big ol' bloodbath... It's gonna be a good day =D. Great job once again, mother was definately pleased and I guess I need to go finish chapter 4 for my story now.
4/11/2012 c8 TigrezzTail
I guess, I need to see what happens in the next chapter, because I'm confused as to what the 3 Konohans purpose was. And I find it funny that Kyuubi thinks this happy, bloodthirsty little boy is the savior the sage spoke of. Talk about incongruous.
I guess, I need to see what happens in the next chapter, because I'm confused as to what the 3 Konohans purpose was. And I find it funny that Kyuubi thinks this happy, bloodthirsty little boy is the savior the sage spoke of. Talk about incongruous.
4/5/2012 c7 1watson85
wow this story is looking really awesome i really can't waite for your next update but i can tell you that all the cliff hangers are extreamly nerve racking but over all yo show a alot of good taste keep up the good work
1watson85wow this story is looking really awesome i really can't waite for your next update but i can tell you that all the cliff hangers are extreamly nerve racking but over all yo show a alot of good taste keep up the good work
4/4/2012 c7 TigrezzTail
I can see Naruto and Kyuubi trying awfully hard to embarrass and have with Zabuza.
I can see Naruto and Kyuubi trying awfully hard to embarrass and have with Zabuza.
4/4/2012 c7 Codename-ShadowFox
Yay psycho Naruto! The best kind of Naruto! I expect fountains of blood in the next chapter, nice work on this one can't wait till the next =D
Yay psycho Naruto! The best kind of Naruto! I expect fountains of blood in the next chapter, nice work on this one can't wait till the next =D
3/29/2012 c6 puma1sunfire
This chapter was quite interesting. It was a very nice chapter that is building up to future chapters and I look forward to reading future updates.
This chapter was quite interesting. It was a very nice chapter that is building up to future chapters and I look forward to reading future updates.
3/28/2012 c6 TigrezzTail
Oh, the conversation with the Hokage should prove most entertaining! Will he tell the truth in order to avoid war, or attempt to manipulate the situation and not let anyone know that they've misplaced their own?
Oh, the conversation with the Hokage should prove most entertaining! Will he tell the truth in order to avoid war, or attempt to manipulate the situation and not let anyone know that they've misplaced their own?
3/28/2012 c6 Gento70
Soooooo...who's going to be the 3rd jinchuuriki team member? Is it Utataka, the 6 tails (he was the old mizukage's body guard, but when his sensei tried to help him by removing the tailed beast, somehow he wasn't going to die from it, Utataka thought he ws trying to kill him, so Utataka killed his sensei and left Kiri) or Fu, the seven tails (she would be best, she was one of the 2 jinchuuriki who went to Akatski of their own free will sometime during the time skip, she was supposed to have a hard life like Naruto and Gaara, so she would be the best. Also, if you decide to change the pairings, she would go great with Naruto, their is just so many fans of the NaruFu pairing that there is more fan art for those two than even Naruto and some other girls from Konoha)
Soooooo...who's going to be the 3rd jinchuuriki team member? Is it Utataka, the 6 tails (he was the old mizukage's body guard, but when his sensei tried to help him by removing the tailed beast, somehow he wasn't going to die from it, Utataka thought he ws trying to kill him, so Utataka killed his sensei and left Kiri) or Fu, the seven tails (she would be best, she was one of the 2 jinchuuriki who went to Akatski of their own free will sometime during the time skip, she was supposed to have a hard life like Naruto and Gaara, so she would be the best. Also, if you decide to change the pairings, she would go great with Naruto, their is just so many fans of the NaruFu pairing that there is more fan art for those two than even Naruto and some other girls from Konoha)
3/1/2012 c5 punkdraco
Is that Roshi? Wow Cliffe..!
Please update maybe you could add more jinchuuriki? Like Yagura?Han?Fuu?Yugito?Bee?Ukataka?...
Do you like ideas?PM me..
Update this please I beg of you
Peace out,keisha
Is that Roshi? Wow Cliffe..!
Please update maybe you could add more jinchuuriki? Like Yagura?Han?Fuu?Yugito?Bee?Ukataka?...
Do you like ideas?PM me..
Update this please I beg of you
Peace out,keisha