for Team Jinchuuriki: Village Hidden in the Darkness9/17/2012 c13 TigrezzTail
Wow, so Danzo makes his move. Well since Sarutobi is aware, he is just deepening the death shot for himself I'm sure. Curious about the prison though, I can't recall anything that sounds familiar.
Wow, so Danzo makes his move. Well since Sarutobi is aware, he is just deepening the death shot for himself I'm sure. Curious about the prison though, I can't recall anything that sounds familiar.
9/17/2012 c13 Guest
supert history
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9/16/2012 c12 Guest
DAMMIT HURRY WRITE YOUR STORY!MAN I WANNA RIP YOU OFF IN PIECES LIKE NARUTO!
-turns into a calm tone-but...i FREAKing like it...i like this Naruto's style
DAMMIT HURRY WRITE YOUR STORY!MAN I WANNA RIP YOU OFF IN PIECES LIKE NARUTO!
-turns into a calm tone-but...i FREAKing like it...i like this Naruto's style
9/16/2012 c11 Guest
Zabuza was kinda...like becuzof the two Gaara and Naruto...so...
Zabuza was kinda...like becuzof the two Gaara and Naruto...so...
9/16/2012 c6 Guest
Yea yea!Zabuza teaching Gaara and Naruto,along with Haku,
WOOHOO!
naruto being the evil part,WOOT!
Yea yea!Zabuza teaching Gaara and Naruto,along with Haku,
WOOHOO!
naruto being the evil part,WOOT!
9/16/2012 c5 Guest
I really like your story,2 demons work together,i really love it,man you could be my teacher already ,since im only 11
I really like your story,2 demons work together,i really love it,man you could be my teacher already ,since im only 11
9/13/2012 c12 
2AmITheRiddleOrTheRiddler
completetly crazy and phycotic... AND I LOVE IT THIS IS ONE OF THE BLOODIEST GORIEST FANFICS EVER IT IS SO SWEET READING ABOUT KIDS TEARING APART ADULTS LIKE ITS NOTHING ITS JUST SO IN SPIRING IT MAKES ME WANT TO PLAY GOD OF WAR AND WRITE A GORY AND BLOODY FANFIC OF MY OWN.
2AmITheRiddleOrTheRiddlercompletetly crazy and phycotic... AND I LOVE IT THIS IS ONE OF THE BLOODIEST GORIEST FANFICS EVER IT IS SO SWEET READING ABOUT KIDS TEARING APART ADULTS LIKE ITS NOTHING ITS JUST SO IN SPIRING IT MAKES ME WANT TO PLAY GOD OF WAR AND WRITE A GORY AND BLOODY FANFIC OF MY OWN.
9/5/2012 c12 TigrezzTail
Well the entire event within the Fire Capitol was certainly entertaining. BUt you have me worried, first Root ANBU and now these new baddies? Poor kids! Or is it poor baddies?
Well the entire event within the Fire Capitol was certainly entertaining. BUt you have me worried, first Root ANBU and now these new baddies? Poor kids! Or is it poor baddies?
9/5/2012 c12 Codename-ShadowFox
Hey WarFlower, It's been a while! Anyway great chapter, plenty of delicious bloodshed. Unfortunately the updates for my fics will be even slower than normal since I no longer have a computer and I'm reading this on my phone. It'll probably be a few months before I can save up enough to buy parts for a new one... bills... ugh. Anyway keep up the great work!
Hey WarFlower, It's been a while! Anyway great chapter, plenty of delicious bloodshed. Unfortunately the updates for my fics will be even slower than normal since I no longer have a computer and I'm reading this on my phone. It'll probably be a few months before I can save up enough to buy parts for a new one... bills... ugh. Anyway keep up the great work!
8/17/2012 c11 73091
update soon you got everyone reading this story wanting more cause it is so good. you can use this if you want when naruto and the group meet the fyuidal lord and explan everything naruto, gaara, haku, and zabuza convence him to give some land to train and also be his versin of ANBU bodyguards after some years is when they become the bodyguards thats my in put use it if you want. good luck.
update soon you got everyone reading this story wanting more cause it is so good. you can use this if you want when naruto and the group meet the fyuidal lord and explan everything naruto, gaara, haku, and zabuza convence him to give some land to train and also be his versin of ANBU bodyguards after some years is when they become the bodyguards thats my in put use it if you want. good luck.
8/13/2012 c1 turtlefan16
Please keep write this series and I'm hope for a time skip soon, and when will the third jinchuuriki gonna come in?
Please keep write this series and I'm hope for a time skip soon, and when will the third jinchuuriki gonna come in?
7/8/2012 c11 Guest
you should do another ch about what hapens when zuba plays on swings
you should do another ch about what hapens when zuba plays on swings