for The Chronicles of Riddick UnderVerse12/31/2011 c2 LolabunnyZ
dun dun dun...
great thing about underverse is that u can pretty much set up any way u want.
dun dun dun...
great thing about underverse is that u can pretty much set up any way u want.
12/31/2011 c1 LolabunnyZ
didnt kno u were workin on another story, wicked awesome! i'll be putting this one on alert too
didnt kno u were workin on another story, wicked awesome! i'll be putting this one on alert too
12/17/2011 c10 Resisting-Moonlight
Awwww...what a nice way to end the first story...riddick, naked in the shower. Yum. Very funny with the whole "did you think you were just gonna carry her soul over and put her back in her body", bit. only riddick would get offered a power/gift and be like "don't need one". I better see a sequel soon. Can't wait to see what mischief they get into...age and consequences be damned! Haha.
Awwww...what a nice way to end the first story...riddick, naked in the shower. Yum. Very funny with the whole "did you think you were just gonna carry her soul over and put her back in her body", bit. only riddick would get offered a power/gift and be like "don't need one". I better see a sequel soon. Can't wait to see what mischief they get into...age and consequences be damned! Haha.
12/17/2011 c8 Priscilla
Love love love the story can't stop reading enough !
Love love love the story can't stop reading enough !
12/14/2011 c6 Resisting-Moonlight
Someone needs a good ass-pounding for touching what's Riddick. Its entertaining hearing him battle with himself about wanting her and the age difference. But its nice to know he's admitting there's no hope for him; he has to be with her. Now go kick some ass!
Someone needs a good ass-pounding for touching what's Riddick. Its entertaining hearing him battle with himself about wanting her and the age difference. But its nice to know he's admitting there's no hope for him; he has to be with her. Now go kick some ass!
12/14/2011 c6 priscilla
eeek,! I hate cliffys! thank you for updating so soon def can't wait for more.
eeek,! I hate cliffys! thank you for updating so soon def can't wait for more.
12/13/2011 c5 Jonny Napalm
Fun little read thus far. Grabbed the Riddick/Kyra vibe well. Looking forward to seeing where it progresses. Just thinking about the poor Lord Marshall...stuck in the Underverse where he sent all those Furyans... That will make for an interesting time later I think. Chronic may be an ally now... but eventually he and the Marshall are going to be REALLY outnumbered. And while the Necromongers may keep what they kill, Furyans are more instincive...relying on their animalistic nature...a primary aspect of animal nature is the Pack mentality, and Riddick is one hell of an Alpha. Looking forward to what you decide to play with next.
Fun little read thus far. Grabbed the Riddick/Kyra vibe well. Looking forward to seeing where it progresses. Just thinking about the poor Lord Marshall...stuck in the Underverse where he sent all those Furyans... That will make for an interesting time later I think. Chronic may be an ally now... but eventually he and the Marshall are going to be REALLY outnumbered. And while the Necromongers may keep what they kill, Furyans are more instincive...relying on their animalistic nature...a primary aspect of animal nature is the Pack mentality, and Riddick is one hell of an Alpha. Looking forward to what you decide to play with next.
12/12/2011 c5 Resisting-Moonlight
Nothing wrong with a tough man admitting he loves someone, especially when they've been through so much together. Nice tough bringing Iman into the story. I've never read that in any of the other stories where riddick goes to the underverse to save Kyra. Usually, he gets her back without trouble. Its nice to see something more action packed.
Nothing wrong with a tough man admitting he loves someone, especially when they've been through so much together. Nice tough bringing Iman into the story. I've never read that in any of the other stories where riddick goes to the underverse to save Kyra. Usually, he gets her back without trouble. Its nice to see something more action packed.
412/11/2011 c4 Resisting-Moonlight
Very interested to see how this story turns out. good start for sure! Love sexual tension between the two. Always thought riddick was sexy and dangerous. Love riddick/jack(kyra) stories. Although for some reason I miss riddick calling her "jack". Kinda like its his pet name for her. Please continue.
Very interested to see how this story turns out. good start for sure! Love sexual tension between the two. Always thought riddick was sexy and dangerous. Love riddick/jack(kyra) stories. Although for some reason I miss riddick calling her "jack". Kinda like its his pet name for her. Please continue.