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7/30/2014 c1 Flaming Rose
(Has a giddy smile on face.)

I weirdly liked it, though I usually don't like Itachi so submissive!
4/6/2014 c1 Shirayuki Hime999
I liked this story very much, the idea was interesting. It's always difficult to place the Uchiha murder in a modern AU setting, because the implications, psychological and practical are different.
There's the real law, more individual traumas, because there's no war 'justification' and often Itachi is reduced to an unstable murderer; you get the idea. Anyway your vagueness did a good job here.
I loved Itachi's insecure behaviour and Sasuke's dominance, but also his frailty, and his incapacity to talk about their past.
The first almost kiss scene was really sensual, as was the final kissing scene. I don't know if you'll continue writing a sequel, but I think it would be great if their story kept on going.
8/28/2013 c1 5keepcalmandhaveacupcake
nice job _
4/14/2013 c1 flaming rose
OH MY GOD, YEEESSSSS, BITCHES! OHH YYYESSSS!
3/10/2013 c1 163Marcia Andrea
Me gusto mucho, jajaja, sip, estoy teniendo un gran amor al SasuIta, no sé porqué pero paso, en fin muy buena historia, me encanto
3/1/2012 c1 6WraithReaper
A more 'Adult' version? Hell Yes!

Loved it!
2/18/2012 c1 2ITAxSASU
awww how sweet.if only they could take it further. ^¬^
1/11/2012 c1 ITAxSASU
i have read worse...
1/4/2012 c1 3illusionneverchangedx
That was cute. I liked it :)
12/24/2011 c1 XxBreathenomorExX
There is no other way to describe this. Just...utter...adorableness.

Uke Itachi is so cute!
12/13/2011 c1 Izalind
It was soooo sweet~ 3 you did great!
12/11/2011 c1 Luna
I think this was fine the way it is. If you do want to progress the story add another chapter or two. This was lovely.
12/10/2011 c1 Hira
What a great story!

I would love to read another longer (adult) Version!

Good luck with the contest.

Greetings Hira
12/9/2011 c1 Rosalie1.0
WONDERFUL! 333 I have no other words! 33333
12/9/2011 c1 Lala
I really liked this story a lot and you should make another version of it.
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