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6/9/2015 c3 Guest
yes it is good but the confession can be made a little more
4/7/2013 c5 4SilentDreamer01
Okay that's the sweetest thing I've read this day, I really needed that! :D
2/5/2013 c5 Fang a.k.a BBB
I love it.
12/10/2012 c5 Festus Flare
Well, that robot bit was... awkward at most. But I could understand that you were aiming for some form of drama. Just... don't try that ever again. I think the story is well paced, but the earlier chapters were a little difficult to read due to the large paragraphs. You did well near the end, and I found this story amusing. Good job!
1/3/2012 c5 Luke-Ross
I want a sequel, please?

hahaaha, ok is your decision... think about it

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1/3/2012 c4 Luke-Ross
I know its hard try to make the chapters longer but, at least to me if you want to write a more complex story, you could try to make the chapters longer, of course i still like it, but it's good to know that you update quickly, that's nice

Don't feel bad about the amount of reviews you have, this is a really good story, i know that you can work it well, use the emotions, include competion for Hayate, i don't know is your decision good luck

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1/3/2012 c3 Luke-Ross
Cute, a little bit short but cute

Good work with the emotions

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1/3/2012 c2 Luke-Ross
I don't like the drama, but i know that is something obvious and necessary in a romantic story, but is Hayate he can handle with that...

I still like it, good work

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1/3/2012 c1 LukeRoss
I like this, actually is going really well, is really real i mean you're not rushing the things with an espontaneous confession, but i expected in the next chapter.

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12/26/2011 c1 NR
Nice story. Itching to find out what Hina saw. One suggestion, try to split your paragraphs up. Especially during dialogue, its easier on the eyes when you people read, and allows the reader to focus on the line. Allowing for more emotion to flow through. Well that's my opion.
12/15/2011 c2 Lazerion
Nice story wonder why no one has reviewed yet ?

Hope you will carry on! For myself,I am trying to finalised my plot for my on ff.

Overall so far getting intresting!

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