5/1/2013 c1 4Pebblepaw
not a whole lot to review on, this is just the chapter from the book

3/3/2013 c3 GingerHannah
The converstion between Klaus and Duncan in the library was very cute. I am loving where this story is going.
(Just one small complaint; sometimes I find it a little hard to deduce which character is actually speaking. Like when it says '"Tell me." Duncan sughed deeply.' and the speaker is Klaus.)

3/3/2013 c1 GingerHannah
I've never read a Series of Unfortunate Events fanfic before. I'm excited to read one. :)

2/11/2013 c5 13Mokuren no Ken
Duncan is now Tickle-Me-Elmo? XD That is quite possibly the most hilarious thing I have heard all day! Oh gods, that was BRILLIANT! The physical contact

12/17/2012 c5 11countingbullets
I can't believe you don't have more reviews! I am dumbfounded. And I will make up for that with a nice long review for you, okay? Okay.

So you have quite a long story here and it definitely has a future. But what I've been noticing is that you must have the book open in front of you as you are writing this because the amount of detail which is the same is...uncanning. I'm not complaining, for I find it quite interesting, but you may want to examine the line between altering the story and copying things straight from the book. Again, I'm not complaining; I find it a nice refresher because after 13 books you sort of start to forget the details of the first few.

The things that I noticed that you are altering from the original story, such as the scenes between Klaus and Duncan, are very good. Anyone who has read the book can tell which parts you have added, and they help with the progression. I like how you add small scenes between Klaus and Duncan, nothing's going too fast. I hate how sometimes people rush characters into relationships that would realistically never happen that way, and you don't do that at all.

Taking a moment out for grammar, you have done a good job. You have a few mistakes, but that is to be expected. Everyone makes mistakes sometimes. I bet there are a few grammatical errors in this review I am typing, and if Aunt Josephine was alive she might be appalled at me! But your story is quite readable and you have done a much better job than many other writers on here. Believe me, it does make a difference.

To be honest, I had never thought of the pairing before I stumbled upon your story. I have to admit I have no strong opinion on this pairing, it's definitely not my favorite, but your story makes it quite enjoyable to read so I am actually liking it more than I would expect I would.

You have obtained my interest, and if you decide to update, even with just a short chapter, I'll be back to give you more praise and long reviews!
Sincerely,
The Bookworm.

1/11/2012 c4 Anime Fan 4 life
y'know

my sister got the game of this

and now it's a few months after

but still I got online

and

looked it up but as I did some research

I found out that there are books...

I was a little dumb founded

because I never heard of it

bu- sorry I'm babble-ing

but it's a good story

I hope you update soon! ^^