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1/3/2012 c1 De1eted Acc0unt
nope- no mistakes that I spotted! :). Amazing story that's perfect for me to read when I'm craving Tratie... which seems to be happening a lot!

~Your "Internet buddy" :),

harrypotter-hoa-pjo FREAK
1/2/2012 c1 mochikins
Aw! Really, really adorable. :)
12/17/2011 c1 33inescapablesuffering
Aww :) That was so cute! Loved it! Just some nice fluff for the holiday.
12/15/2011 c1 4Magikidd
Cute :)
12/12/2011 c1 6Constellapeia
Oh this was so cutee! It's a good short read if you're in the Christmas spirit ;3

Haha I love Travis! He's one of my favourite characters from the PJO series. I especially loved the bit in your story when Travis was talking about kisses from Santa Claus- "I mean, I could get a kiss from him but that would be... ugh!" Haha, loved that bit!

In the second section of the story, you wrote "Days past and the..." I think you meant to write, "Days PASSED..."

There was also a mix up in the second section where you wrote, "would make Katie realize her true lovey-dovey feelings for; A pure miracle." - That bit at the end, did you mean to write, "would make Katie realize her true lovey-dovey feelings for HIM;"?

Apart from that, it's all good :)

~ SKYE :]
12/11/2011 c1 10MichaelPhelpsfanatic101
Hehe
12/11/2011 c1 5HexMeIntoAHawthorne
BEST STORY EVER! People reading this: Yes I know this is my own review, but I wanted one one really badly

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