3/28/2012 c1 Idontwanthisaccountanymore
That was beautiful, I love your style of writing it's clean, simple, but has amazing detail. It wasn't cheesy like most it sounded like it was actually coming from a teenage boy with everyday troubles. The only part that disappointed me was that this didn't actually happen in Twilight, but again I must mention that was great. 3
That was beautiful, I love your style of writing it's clean, simple, but has amazing detail. It wasn't cheesy like most it sounded like it was actually coming from a teenage boy with everyday troubles. The only part that disappointed me was that this didn't actually happen in Twilight, but again I must mention that was great. 3
3/2/2012 c1 odiejae
i LOVED this story! from the boys slowly exploring their sexuality and relationship to bella and alice setting them back up to their beautiful children! it seemed pretty obvious that edward wore his heart on his sleeve and i'm so relieved his mother figured out what was going on and was there for him. and his father came around too. poor jasper, he sure learned things the hard way but i'm so happy his parents came around, loving him for who he is. and bella and alice are just amazing. i love how they got the boys reaquainted with each other. wonder if they ever told them that they were totally set up at the wedding. kudos to bella for going to jake's wedding just for the sake of her best friend. but i really love the kids. snarky angela was hilarious. jasper and edward are surrounded by the most amazing friends. what angela did for them was just amazingly selfless.
wow, such a great story, thanks for sharing! :)
i LOVED this story! from the boys slowly exploring their sexuality and relationship to bella and alice setting them back up to their beautiful children! it seemed pretty obvious that edward wore his heart on his sleeve and i'm so relieved his mother figured out what was going on and was there for him. and his father came around too. poor jasper, he sure learned things the hard way but i'm so happy his parents came around, loving him for who he is. and bella and alice are just amazing. i love how they got the boys reaquainted with each other. wonder if they ever told them that they were totally set up at the wedding. kudos to bella for going to jake's wedding just for the sake of her best friend. but i really love the kids. snarky angela was hilarious. jasper and edward are surrounded by the most amazing friends. what angela did for them was just amazingly selfless.
wow, such a great story, thanks for sharing! :)