3/1/2017 c1 Guest
i am completely wrecked with feels, thanks
i am completely wrecked with feels, thanks
8/1/2014 c1 Guest
Im really glad I ran into your fic after reading lily of the lamplight (so far).Your story is awesome and heartbreaking and the feelings you evoke are intense. Love really is more poignant the closer it is to I'M STILL HOPING THIS ISN'T GIL'S END IN LOTL -OR AT LEAST HE GETS RESCUED AFTER LOSING CONSCIOUSNESS ! Please no... I hope you'll join us in begging George to not kill off Gilbert :,(
Im really glad I ran into your fic after reading lily of the lamplight (so far).Your story is awesome and heartbreaking and the feelings you evoke are intense. Love really is more poignant the closer it is to I'M STILL HOPING THIS ISN'T GIL'S END IN LOTL -OR AT LEAST HE GETS RESCUED AFTER LOSING CONSCIOUSNESS ! Please no... I hope you'll join us in begging George to not kill off Gilbert :,(
11/5/2012 c1 4shakespeares
God, this is heart wrenching. The way Gilbert can so vividly imagine so many things he has never known really brings across his unfathomable longing and regret, and his faint happiness as his life fades is all the more tragic, because both the reader and Gilbert know that his thoughts are only fantasies, and he could never have the only thing he wanted.
You really got my feels.
God, this is heart wrenching. The way Gilbert can so vividly imagine so many things he has never known really brings across his unfathomable longing and regret, and his faint happiness as his life fades is all the more tragic, because both the reader and Gilbert know that his thoughts are only fantasies, and he could never have the only thing he wanted.
You really got my feels.
9/1/2012 c1 Abby
Wow...beautifully written, no spelling errors. It seems like you put a lot of effort into this, and I loved it.
But it's so saaaddd:(
Wow...beautifully written, no spelling errors. It seems like you put a lot of effort into this, and I loved it.
But it's so saaaddd:(
7/27/2012 c1 4Master of the Hellish Yard
Dear :
I had nearly forgotten why I spend so much time in the tragedy genre.
The way you used present tense emphasized Gilbert's thoughts quite well, especially with the way they went in the last paragraph. The description of his fantasies and wishes, regrets and desires, fit well into the pattern. I can see Roderich being the one to find him, perhaps with Vash by his side.
Very pretty.
Sincerely,
Master of the Hellish Yard
Dear :
I had nearly forgotten why I spend so much time in the tragedy genre.
The way you used present tense emphasized Gilbert's thoughts quite well, especially with the way they went in the last paragraph. The description of his fantasies and wishes, regrets and desires, fit well into the pattern. I can see Roderich being the one to find him, perhaps with Vash by his side.
Very pretty.
Sincerely,
Master of the Hellish Yard
6/29/2012 c1 cookiemonster321
T.T
I'm crying right now...That was too much. It was amazingly beautiful, but too much for my weak little fan-girl heart
T.T
I'm crying right now...That was too much. It was amazingly beautiful, but too much for my weak little fan-girl heart
2/1/2012 c1 1DreamingFadesAway
Oh god. Alright. Yes I'm sobbing. Very well written, and I love Gilbert's love and memories that never happened and it's so sad I need to go find my cat to huggle now but all the applause and awards for you because this is one of the saddest stories I've ever read.
Oh god. Alright. Yes I'm sobbing. Very well written, and I love Gilbert's love and memories that never happened and it's so sad I need to go find my cat to huggle now but all the applause and awards for you because this is one of the saddest stories I've ever read.
1/13/2012 c1 1soapscent
This is beautiful. Why does this not have more reviews? Excellent descriptions, good grammar, no misspelled words, absolutely AWESOMESAUCE.
This is beautiful. Why does this not have more reviews? Excellent descriptions, good grammar, no misspelled words, absolutely AWESOMESAUCE.