
8/19/2020 c1 Velbehag
Loved this read, easygoing, light and fluffy. Also feels so homely and you just wish Naruto could actually have had a childhood like this... fav
Loved this read, easygoing, light and fluffy. Also feels so homely and you just wish Naruto could actually have had a childhood like this... fav
9/9/2018 c1
5Catacroker
I loved this fic, it gave a lot of warm feelings, it was a delight. The characterizations were great, the dialogs funny and on character. Your writing is very good. Thanks!

I loved this fic, it gave a lot of warm feelings, it was a delight. The characterizations were great, the dialogs funny and on character. Your writing is very good. Thanks!
3/5/2018 c1
2FFFG
Awww, this is so sweet! I really like the dynamic you set up between them. My personal favourite was Kakashi expressing his disbelief at Iruka beating him at Wii because "but you wear sweater vests!" Precious. This was definitely a fun AU, and I would love to have read more on it. Thank you for the read. KTN

Awww, this is so sweet! I really like the dynamic you set up between them. My personal favourite was Kakashi expressing his disbelief at Iruka beating him at Wii because "but you wear sweater vests!" Precious. This was definitely a fun AU, and I would love to have read more on it. Thank you for the read. KTN
1/2/2017 c1 Guest
Wonderful story, thank you!
Wonderful story, thank you!
9/12/2014 c1 jess.c.kong
What a sweet fic! I would have liked a little more PDA but I'll take what I can get! My favorite line is when Iruka replies to Kakashi's "you wound me deeply" with "I wish I could"...hilarious! My only constructive criticism would be to watch the verb tenses being used; the sentences will read a lot more smoothly if those were corrected. But still - a very enjoyable read!
What a sweet fic! I would have liked a little more PDA but I'll take what I can get! My favorite line is when Iruka replies to Kakashi's "you wound me deeply" with "I wish I could"...hilarious! My only constructive criticism would be to watch the verb tenses being used; the sentences will read a lot more smoothly if those were corrected. But still - a very enjoyable read!
11/11/2012 c1
8endingofbehan
wow! i just looooove this! Love this teasing and pervy Kakashi! hahahaha. i enjoyed watching Iruka beats Kakashi at Wii. :D

wow! i just looooove this! Love this teasing and pervy Kakashi! hahahaha. i enjoyed watching Iruka beats Kakashi at Wii. :D
8/28/2012 c1 cellaria
love it! you should continue it! or do a similar one but way longer! with some hot love thrown in of course hahah
love it! you should continue it! or do a similar one but way longer! with some hot love thrown in of course hahah
8/15/2012 c1 gabrielle
nice story, could it be like this? Naruto being really taken care of the third... a happy childhood...
So far from reality...
I hope read another one!
than you!
nice story, could it be like this? Naruto being really taken care of the third... a happy childhood...
So far from reality...
I hope read another one!
than you!
6/21/2012 c1
2Litny
What an interesting narrative style. I liked your story very much :) Thanks for writing it!

What an interesting narrative style. I liked your story very much :) Thanks for writing it!
4/3/2012 c1
21cienne
This was wonderfully written. Fleeting but in the moment..., is that how they say it? It's smart how you were able to write an alternate universe and still be able to incorporate what happened in the Naruto-universe. Kakashi is still a damned pervert and Iruka so naive, I love it!

This was wonderfully written. Fleeting but in the moment..., is that how they say it? It's smart how you were able to write an alternate universe and still be able to incorporate what happened in the Naruto-universe. Kakashi is still a damned pervert and Iruka so naive, I love it!
1/17/2012 c1 RobotInTheRoom
I really liked it and would be interested in reading more if you were so inclined! Nice little world you created. Stands well on its own though. Thanks!
I really liked it and would be interested in reading more if you were so inclined! Nice little world you created. Stands well on its own though. Thanks!
12/25/2011 c1 GigaDrill
Enjoyable, interesting, and fun! I liked the little world you built for this story while basically just planting the characters as they were right into it! Your tale was delightful and well written, leaving me with a very satisfied feeling at the end. Keep up the good work!
Enjoyable, interesting, and fun! I liked the little world you built for this story while basically just planting the characters as they were right into it! Your tale was delightful and well written, leaving me with a very satisfied feeling at the end. Keep up the good work!
12/16/2011 c1 wow
So beautiful. You had their personalities down to a 'T'.
I especially loved Kakashi.
Guhh. That's all I can say 'Guhh'
So beautiful. You had their personalities down to a 'T'.
I especially loved Kakashi.
Guhh. That's all I can say 'Guhh'
12/15/2011 c1 Individual
This fanfiction was very well written. It definitely deserves more attention than what it's recieved.
This fanfiction was very well written. It definitely deserves more attention than what it's recieved.