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12/4/2015 c1 sfspeedy
Such fun read! Thank you!

12/4/2015 c1 bon123
Hey you. Got here through Rochelle's recommendation on FB. Don't know how I've managed to miss this one. Such a a fun read. Great story! Thank you! :)
12/4/2015 c2 renewagain
Thanks for the ski tips. Never done it. Wish I had an all-black-wearing-backwards-skiing teacher. sigh.
12/4/2015 c1 renewagain
Oh that was awesome! I'm so glad Rochelle rec'd it bc I was up at 2am and now less than an hour later I'm so happy for the toe-curling couple.
12/3/2015 c1 ChristyWIX
This was absolutely delicious. Deb (Drotuno) put it out on FB today and I'm so glad she did. I floved this. I used to ski so much when I was between seventeen and twenty-five. I can't find any boots comfortable enough. Small feet, big calves. Anyways, I haven't skied in twenty-two years. I used to ski so well, I could ski backwards! You brought back a ton of memories. Thank you. I digress. I had the feeling that those feelings were mutual. That he liked her as much, and as long. When he started to tell her in the hot tub, I just knew he was telling her he was going to Northwestern as well. Turns out I was wrong on the school, yet he will be very close by. Close enough that they could live together. I really loved him teaching her how to ski and getting her up to blues so soon. I popped up to blues in two weekends, yay! So yes, it is possible to learn that quickly. I liked when Alice brought the binocs to her and she told her that Edward liked her as well. To go for it. Then, the flirting they had amped up. Delicious. I'm glad they got stopped in the hot tub. And, even more happy they continued in her bed. That he had the courage to go into her room and talk. I really liked that they then made love all night long. Most importantly, it was all realistic. Talking and laughing during their sex, like normal people. I rally loved that he's already planning in her flying to see him and flying down to see her. He's all in. Yay! I loved all the 'falling' breaks in the story, they were hilarious! This was fantastic! Thank you very much for putting it out here for us to enjoy. ~Christy
12/3/2015 c1 dpennell007
Can't help but love a man with a plan, and a girl who's not afraid to ask for what she wants. Excellent one shot!
8/5/2015 c1 jennayg123
Absolutely loved this! Can't wait to check out your other stories!
6/29/2015 c1 Kinsano
I loved it!
3/15/2015 c1 KimiD
This was great I really enjoyed the analogies throughout the story But I especially loved that he had Asked Alice to get Bella up there and that it was really to see Bella that he went to visit his sister every year... Sahweeet!
2/27/2015 c1 TrinityLJ
Loved it! I definitely think you should extend this into a full story.
12/28/2014 c1 Sapho99
I was just looking for something short to read and came across this story, this is my second
read on this story. Why in the world haven't you expanded this story, what a great start!
Hopefully your in a good place now and will consider doing that. find a buddy to help.
take care
11/27/2014 c1 30Mumofpicklegirls
Great writing - I giggled every time I got to a chapter change - LOL!
10/31/2014 c1 pootz307
Sigh. Love it more and more every time.
6/2/2014 c1 Novel's addict
Loooooveeeeeeed it :D
5/8/2014 c1 Treestar2509
These two are so cute. I loved everything about this story line. Well done. Thanks for sharing. :)
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