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8/10/2012 c2 GAH
i was excited to see this pairing but your writing is a bit choppy! im mostly just confused? but practice makes perfect :)
5/24/2012 c2 9tomorrow4eva
That was kind of disappointing. If you merged both chapters, you'd still only have a teaser. Good idea, but it needs an actual story go to with it. Also, your fic will be more readable if you start on a new line each time a new character speaks. Good luck with it as it goes on!
4/6/2012 c2 5Sunshine-Midnight123
This makes zero sense to me. You should take to time to actually have a decent sized chapter before posting also.

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