for The Secrets of Albus Potter2/17/2022 c1 Guest
Ahhh
Ahhh
5/19/2020 c20 STB
You know, after chapter 18, you lost me.
But just a little comment, why does it seems rushed? I know it's hard to write death scene but... oh well. Anyway, do you plan to write a sequel? If it is, I wanted to see Albus again. So sad. If not, well... I dunno. Character I was looking for only about Albus. You know what I mean
You know, after chapter 18, you lost me.
But just a little comment, why does it seems rushed? I know it's hard to write death scene but... oh well. Anyway, do you plan to write a sequel? If it is, I wanted to see Albus again. So sad. If not, well... I dunno. Character I was looking for only about Albus. You know what I mean
7/24/2019 c16 Ravenclawmaddy13
I did cry. This chapter was so sad! My dad thought I was crying over something and not just a story but that is so sad, congratulations on portraying those sad emotions though. I’m sorry to hear about your grandfather. Keep Writing!
I did cry. This chapter was so sad! My dad thought I was crying over something and not just a story but that is so sad, congratulations on portraying those sad emotions though. I’m sorry to hear about your grandfather. Keep Writing!
8/14/2017 c16 Guest
DO NOT PLAY WITH MY EMOTIONS LIKE THIS! I AM LYING ON MY BEDTOOM FLOOR SOBBING! DO NOT FO THIS TO ME!
DO NOT PLAY WITH MY EMOTIONS LIKE THIS! I AM LYING ON MY BEDTOOM FLOOR SOBBING! DO NOT FO THIS TO ME!
12/26/2016 c20 Guest
Maybe if you wrote a story if Albus settling into the afterlife with Harry's parents,sirius,Remus and Fred and others
Maybe if you wrote a story if Albus settling into the afterlife with Harry's parents,sirius,Remus and Fred and others
9/10/2014 c20 
1c905pinkpanther
wow! pleased add more I want to knew what
happened to al's body :)
cool your an awesome dude
1c905pinkpantherwow! pleased add more I want to knew what
happened to al's body :)
cool your an awesome dude
1/5/2014 c17 11OhSnapItsMadison
I'm crying at the momment. I'm just sitting in my family room, on the couch, crying.
11OhSnapItsMadisonI'm crying at the momment. I'm just sitting in my family room, on the couch, crying.
1/5/2014 c5 OhSnapItsMadison
Actually, Barty Crouch Jr got his soul sucked out by a Dementor in Harry's fourth year
Actually, Barty Crouch Jr got his soul sucked out by a Dementor in Harry's fourth year
6/26/2013 c20 8Phictionmaker7
I actually cried because of this story and started monologuing! Oh my gosh what a fantastically sad story. I'm so glad I stayed up late reading this; it was definitely worth it. I just wish Georgia and Al could have been together and/ or James and her could have a baby with Lily Evans eyes and name it Al. Wouldn't that be so sweet? Great read. So sad.
8Phictionmaker7I actually cried because of this story and started monologuing! Oh my gosh what a fantastically sad story. I'm so glad I stayed up late reading this; it was definitely worth it. I just wish Georgia and Al could have been together and/ or James and her could have a baby with Lily Evans eyes and name it Al. Wouldn't that be so sweet? Great read. So sad.
8/7/2012 c20 asp underworld
great story, sad but good. up date soon
great story, sad but good. up date soon
2/6/2012 c19 Sweets and Dreams
Please update!
I can't believe that albus died ;(
And Your story is pretty good
Please update!
I can't believe that albus died ;(
And Your story is pretty good
1/13/2012 c19 8Rebecca Calzone
I get all depressed in a good way when i read your story. One thing though- people like Umbridge and Parkinson wouldnt have passed their maiden names to their kids seeing as they are females
love the story by the way!
8Rebecca CalzoneI get all depressed in a good way when i read your story. One thing though- people like Umbridge and Parkinson wouldnt have passed their maiden names to their kids seeing as they are females
love the story by the way!