
9/8/2020 c9 fallowell
It would be really awesome if this was continued. Even if just an epilogue. Very well written. Glad you shared this much with us.
It would be really awesome if this was continued. Even if just an epilogue. Very well written. Glad you shared this much with us.
7/21/2017 c8
4Lord Geovanni
I wish that you would be able to continue this story. It is remarkably well written and I enjoy it each time I read. I love the small intricate details and the interactions between the SOLDER and Time Travelers

I wish that you would be able to continue this story. It is remarkably well written and I enjoy it each time I read. I love the small intricate details and the interactions between the SOLDER and Time Travelers
10/14/2016 c9
3UnLike Us
Hi new reader here. Just wanted to drop a few words saying that I thought your story was quite interesting. Especially the way the friendship between Cloud and Sephiroth develops. Since Cloud distances himself from all of his peers, he's only true friend that he can relax and enjoy his time with is Sephiroth. His fear for the loss of friendship and the constant weight, doubt and guilt of his other mission. That he isn't what he seems. I believe, however that you could have emphasised this even more strongly in this story.
Thank you for the enjoyable read!

Hi new reader here. Just wanted to drop a few words saying that I thought your story was quite interesting. Especially the way the friendship between Cloud and Sephiroth develops. Since Cloud distances himself from all of his peers, he's only true friend that he can relax and enjoy his time with is Sephiroth. His fear for the loss of friendship and the constant weight, doubt and guilt of his other mission. That he isn't what he seems. I believe, however that you could have emphasised this even more strongly in this story.
Thank you for the enjoyable read!
11/17/2014 c2
2ILoveMasterChief
I liked the part about Cloud giving Sephiroth cookies... it's just so cute to imagine.

I liked the part about Cloud giving Sephiroth cookies... it's just so cute to imagine.
7/20/2014 c8 Suzululu4moe
Real men wear dresses! One of my favourtie parts in the game. Right after golden saucer games and chocobo breeding/ riding.
Real men wear dresses! One of my favourtie parts in the game. Right after golden saucer games and chocobo breeding/ riding.
7/20/2014 c7 Suzululu4moe
Traveling in style. Even if it is kinda funny seeing stoic and serious men such as Sephy and Vincent ride those birds.
Traveling in style. Even if it is kinda funny seeing stoic and serious men such as Sephy and Vincent ride those birds.