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1/10/2017 c16 abrant554
There is only a couple of things wrong with this story...'it is too short'...'it should have been longer'...
'could have had more chapters'...nough said. :) Excellent. Pleasure to read.
1/10/2017 c5 abrant554
LOL...great.
11/8/2015 c16 46missblueeyes63
Good story. Enjoyed the read.
5/25/2014 c11 prince-bishop
No don't want Gibbs/Tony time that is boring Tony and Ziva time is much much better, besides who want's to spend time with a Gruff old Git like Gibbs, good story
7/11/2012 c16 Amy Rackley
Good story. Only problem was the bad language but overall not bad.
3/27/2012 c16 L8E IN TIME
Very cute story! I loved it so much I had to go back and read it again!
2/14/2012 c16 2Ryley
Absolutely fabulous! I loved just about every word. You really did your homework with the medical stuff. That gets you extra points in my book. :) Can't wait to read more of your work.
1/17/2012 c16 danielle007
Too cute. =D I like the snippet of Kate.
1/17/2012 c16 wandsnroses
:)
1/16/2012 c16 12lizrat66
Really enjoyed this.
1/15/2012 c16 33starryjules
Awww *grins* What a lovely ending! I so enjoyed this story and would say I can't wait to read your next one...but I just did! Can't wait for many more from you; you are a fantastic author. Thanks for sharing!
1/15/2012 c16 ShortSarcasm
Loved it
1/15/2012 c16 Glow60
Thank you for writing the story. I really enjoyed it and hated to see it come to an end.
1/15/2012 c16 mprmusings
perfect! amelia the ninja kitty :D thank you for this story, i look forward to your next story. thank you again.
1/14/2012 c15 wandsnroses
hola! read the whole story today and think its pretty awesome! nice job!
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