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1/13/2012 c15 WhiteTigerBlackPanther
Very well written so enjoying this story.
1/12/2012 c15 ShortSarcasm
Loved it
1/12/2012 c15 33starryjules
Just popping in for a quick review before I fall too far behind again! Great chapters, but special love for:

Pretty, pretty ninja princess

-and-

Tree porn

:) Awesome!
1/12/2012 c15 danielle007
Glad Tony is getting better!

This was a fun chapter to read. Cannot wait for that "creative revenge" heheheee
1/11/2012 c15 7TheEternalCrow
Loved it great job!
1/11/2012 c15 mprmusings
Ha! i do like the tony and tim dynamic most of the time. except when tim likes to think he is so much smarter than tony ;) thank you for the update :D
1/11/2012 c14 danielle007
Awww, that's cute! I like this chapter. =D
1/10/2012 c14 mprmusings
"pretty ninja princesses" LOL I am enjoying this ff so very much. thank you for sharing!
1/9/2012 c13 33starryjules
That was interesting! I still really like the medical side of this story and seeing realistically how Tony's rehab would go. I'm glad he's got his voice back, but I can't help but wonder if he's gonna push himself too hard now.

Great chapter!
1/9/2012 c13 mprmusings
yeah-thank you for the update! written well, so well that my throat actually hurt whilst reading tony's therapy endeavors :D

looking forward to the next one, thank you!
1/6/2012 c12 starryjules
LOVE for this chapter!

Ziva/Gibbs...Gibbs/Gibbs...Gibbs/Tony. All great!

I think you're right here; Gibbs is used to letting Tony talk himself hoarse, during which time he usually works out his own anger/problems with very little input from Gibbs. Take speech away from Tony and he's definitely going to get frustrated, and the boss will be a little at a loss for how to make him better. But he (a.k.a. you!) did a great job with it. I really love the last paragraph, particularly:

"You have my permission to want to wreck this place. You just don't do it. You keep on not doing it, and eventually you don't want to anymore."

Not only great Gibbs-to-Tony advice, but great real-life advice for anyone, I think!

Looking forward to more :) ~Jules
1/6/2012 c11 starryjules
I am way behind on reading, but that mean two chapters in one go...woohoo!

I agree, Gibbs knew Ziva and the gang were taking care of Tony, and papa smurf doesn't rest until the case is closed. Didn't feel anticlimactic at all; I liked it!
1/5/2012 c12 danielle007
Hahaaa! OH MAN I love this chapter! AMAZING! Of course it can be argued it's OOC but heck, it's a great chapter and I enjoyed it! =D
1/5/2012 c12 ShortSarcasm
Loved it
1/5/2012 c12 WhiteTigerBlackPanther
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
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