for Truth and Lies3/25/2014 c5 
19Kira Akuma
XD Wow! This story is great! You should definitely do lingxoc though! I hope you will be able to write more soon!
19Kira AkumaXD Wow! This story is great! You should definitely do lingxoc though! I hope you will be able to write more soon!
3/25/2012 c4 5biscotti gelato
I really enjoy your story! I'd like to read more, yeah. So, show some more awesomeness, dear Author.
5biscotti gelatoI really enjoy your story! I'd like to read more, yeah. So, show some more awesomeness, dear Author.
2/23/2012 c4 Cupcake-chan
wow super awesome story so far~!
you should make Sugi an Alkahestrist, you know because she passed through the gate and stuff~
anyway i love the story~! upload soon~!
wow super awesome story so far~!
you should make Sugi an Alkahestrist, you know because she passed through the gate and stuff~
anyway i love the story~! upload soon~!
12/29/2011 c4 4Cata-nee
Oh, I just wanted to make sure. FMA's plot is so awesome, I guess fanfic authors can't resist putting their own twists on it, and making it better and/or ruining it. :D
Not that I think you'll make it bad or anything. I just hope you don't go hiatus on me. Like I said before, LingxOC stories either move too slow, or just stop at the GreedLing part. Good luck on proceeding farther than that~
Okay, I think Calista's seriousness is easing. I'm sincerely glad she didn't run in like an idiot and get herself killed. In her position, I don't think there could have been anything to do. Speaking of that scene, I seriously love Scar and his religious talk. It's just so inspiring.
Did Calista lose her personality? :P It's just a joke. It's too early for me to judge her yet.
Love triangles are hard to write. Even though I've seen fanfics that say they're going to do them, they don't quite get to that part yet. I'm sure I'll be able to do well, though.
So good going there, making it just Ling x OC. It's Ling's turn to shine and Ling alone.
4Cata-neeOh, I just wanted to make sure. FMA's plot is so awesome, I guess fanfic authors can't resist putting their own twists on it, and making it better and/or ruining it. :D
Not that I think you'll make it bad or anything. I just hope you don't go hiatus on me. Like I said before, LingxOC stories either move too slow, or just stop at the GreedLing part. Good luck on proceeding farther than that~
Okay, I think Calista's seriousness is easing. I'm sincerely glad she didn't run in like an idiot and get herself killed. In her position, I don't think there could have been anything to do. Speaking of that scene, I seriously love Scar and his religious talk. It's just so inspiring.
Did Calista lose her personality? :P It's just a joke. It's too early for me to judge her yet.
Love triangles are hard to write. Even though I've seen fanfics that say they're going to do them, they don't quite get to that part yet. I'm sure I'll be able to do well, though.
So good going there, making it just Ling x OC. It's Ling's turn to shine and Ling alone.
12/28/2011 c4 5Star of Courage
Calista is weird and a bit too serious. What did she lose to Truth! Yes! Have Sugi get her memory back over time! I like her forming bonds with Lan Fan, Fu, and Ling. Yeah! I like the LingXoc and GreedXoc friendship.
5Star of CourageCalista is weird and a bit too serious. What did she lose to Truth! Yes! Have Sugi get her memory back over time! I like her forming bonds with Lan Fan, Fu, and Ling. Yeah! I like the LingXoc and GreedXoc friendship.
12/28/2011 c2 Star of Courage
Oh dear. FMA is awesome! She's got a short...a-attention span. XD a giant moving! Ice cube. XD so Sugi lost her memory...what did Calista lose?
Oh dear. FMA is awesome! She's got a short...a-attention span. XD a giant moving! Ice cube. XD so Sugi lost her memory...what did Calista lose?
12/28/2011 c3 6Tear Luzu Magnus
Congratz. You're the first person I'v ever added to my Faves.
Love it, btw. I'm jealous I didn't think of an idea this cool before you! I love Sugi. Sugi is me 100%, and my sister is oddly like Calista. I like your characters and their storylines, keep it up.
6Tear Luzu MagnusCongratz. You're the first person I'v ever added to my Faves.
Love it, btw. I'm jealous I didn't think of an idea this cool before you! I love Sugi. Sugi is me 100%, and my sister is oddly like Calista. I like your characters and their storylines, keep it up.
12/28/2011 c4 56LeFay Strent
Eeep! You mentioned me! I feel so honored!
Even though I knew that Sugi was missing her memories it never occurred to me that that was the toll she paid. I kept wondering, "What did she give up?" I'm so slow.
I think that Calista got her brain taken away. When I picture her I see this girl with such a short attention span. But I think its hilarious.
I liked this chapter. You were pretty spot on with the Scar scene.
56LeFay StrentEeep! You mentioned me! I feel so honored!
Even though I knew that Sugi was missing her memories it never occurred to me that that was the toll she paid. I kept wondering, "What did she give up?" I'm so slow.
I think that Calista got her brain taken away. When I picture her I see this girl with such a short attention span. But I think its hilarious.
I liked this chapter. You were pretty spot on with the Scar scene.
12/28/2011 c4 xIzumi-chan
FF.Net is being a bish, so I can't log on from my mobile... Gomen, Fo-chan!
I actually like Calista better than Sugi, so whenever it's her, chapter, I get really hyper... Most likely because I know what's going to happen and can't wait to read about it in more detail :P
And I wanna comment on what was taken from Calista! It was her - *gets mauled* ...Okay, okay, I won't say anything... -_-'
Anyways, update soon~!
Ja ne, Fo-chan~! :D
{~Izumi~}
FF.Net is being a bish, so I can't log on from my mobile... Gomen, Fo-chan!
I actually like Calista better than Sugi, so whenever it's her, chapter, I get really hyper... Most likely because I know what's going to happen and can't wait to read about it in more detail :P
And I wanna comment on what was taken from Calista! It was her - *gets mauled* ...Okay, okay, I won't say anything... -_-'
Anyways, update soon~!
Ja ne, Fo-chan~! :D
{~Izumi~}