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8/23/2013 c1 pottersparky
It not long but very good. It nice to see family come together. Now if only rick sky and team could be there with them. After all rick did say that baloo was one of them before thet part ways. Thanks for email yoU are frist talespin writer hear from. I love baloo and becky as married fanfiction. My fav talespin writer is ann29. She writen the most fanfiction about becky and baloo being married. Anyway thanks for good read.
7/11/2012 c1 42omega1979
Hahahaha caught by Rebecca, classic. really enjoyed this one. Ok it was smutty as hell, but at the same time felt in character. loved Baloo'd reaction so "That's my boy". great job on this
2/26/2012 c1 1x-The Devil's Advocate-x
Nice job on this one-shot! :)

This was definitely smutty, lol. You do a nice job on smut scenes, you know? This was very nice! I always have an awful time writing one-shots myself. Maybe I should take lessons from you, LOL.

Well done on this. ^^
12/24/2011 c1 6The Dark Lynx
Great one-shot! Very sexy ;) haha
12/21/2011 c1 20zencando
Very nice! At least kit got to finish before... well I don't want to give too much away in a review lol
12/19/2011 c1 Kvin125
the friends taunting kit at the party made me laugh. great story!

-Reish
12/19/2011 c1 DJ
Nice one shot

Cool

beetween you and me your better than other authors on here when it comes to porns
12/19/2011 c1 5
That was entertaining. ha ha kit was cought.

So your bulding on this. intreasting.
12/19/2011 c1 178Lavenderpaw
okay cute.

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