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1/2/2013 c2 37Official Natasha Pavlova
FEVER! I LOVE that song! This is great! I like how you have an all girl band too! Update as soon as possible!
1/10/2012 c2 DopeBass
yeah ! you updated your story ! I am so glad you are finally a author that isn't to obvious with your story , you want to find out what happens . what I am wondering is what each girl plays ? well great job ! :) keep up the work !
1/1/2012 c2 6Beatlesfan93
This is really good! I love reading stories about the Hamburg days. I think the plot is also very original.

It’s fantastic that you write the dialogue with their accent, it makes it really realistic.

I hope you update soon! :D
12/31/2011 c2 1vickytmandy
Well done! I liked how you put the lyrics in between the boys' thoughts. Great song choice too! I felt like it gave the girls more of a sex appeal. I couldn't help but think 'Marilyn Monroe' (idk why)

Update soon!

Peace&love
12/31/2011 c2 10ByeByeRainBird
EHMAHGAWD~ 8D

I loves ittttttttttttttt

Hehehehehhhhh XD

Kayy(:
12/20/2011 c1 rockandroll
Wow I really like this story , it's a lot different . I hope you update because this plot seems very promising . A couple of things though I hope you give a full description on the girls , it gives readers better understanding on how we picture things on our minds . I loved the girls bickering , I can't wait to see how this story progresses . And Stu is freaking sexy , I can imagine swooning over him too ! the pairings ...? hmmm? I can't already tell who is going to end up with who ... WHICH IS GREAT! Finally I can be taken of guard and surprised . It's to on boring to tell if the loud daring person is going to be with ...John or something and the quiet shy girl is going to be with George . yah know? Your story has tons of promise man ! update :D
12/20/2011 c1 DopeBass
OHH I LIKE THIS STORY ! I never seen a plot like this , it's very original . the girls do seem like the group , I hope you pair some of them up . it would be cool how the story goes on if you do . LOL Kat is just like George , it would be cute if you paired them up . it would be logical if you paired him with Leah cause they are quiet and shy but everyone likes suprisises and twists right ? well I am real interested and hope you continue . hope you put it on surprises don't make things to obviouis just like with ... my example on top I guess ;) . you sound like a bad ass author , so good luck !on your story ! :D

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12/19/2011 c1 TheOriginalBeatleBug
I likes it so far! :D MORE MORE MORE! XD
12/19/2011 c1 3LyssaInTheSky
Lemme rape Stu ;3 PLEASSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

I'll give ya adorable Ringo puppy eyesssss 3

Love love love this, Mandy!

~Lyssa
12/19/2011 c1 1vickytmandy
Stu is so cute(:

Hmm, but I think that pete is quite a catch too (well at least his face is)

That was groovy! I wonder who's gonna be with who! I can't wait to read more(:

Update soon!

Peace&love
12/19/2011 c1 2IndigoNowhereGirl
OMG, It's so good!

I love the banter that goes on in it and how you made the girls in a band rather than them just being adoring fans.

It made me laugh and I will be eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
12/19/2011 c1 10ByeByeRainBird
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

I loves it I LOVE IT!11

!(insert evil grin here) I adore Kattttt~ And Maddie ;D And Sadie :3 and Leahhhhhhhhhhhhh

SO, LIKE, HOW FAR IS THIS GONNA GOOOOO? LIKEEEEE THROGHOUT ALL OF BEATLEY HISTORYYYYY? 8DDDDD PLEASSSSSSE?~

IT HAS TO

Because Richie-boy, the loverly lion, has to come into le picture! :

OTTAY?

I LOVES YOUUUUUUUUUU

AND I loves your brilliancy and awesomesauceness as well as all that's inbetween~

Yer a sweety, dolllll!

So go writes more, ottay? 8D (pfft I know you are lol but whatevarrrr)

love your adorable strawberry walrus penguin sweetheart,

Kay(:

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