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7/2/2018 c1 Alexia
Loved Temari's love for her brothers. Nicely written!
5/10/2018 c1 6ThreeGnomesInATrenchCoat
So good! Really sweet and amazing!
10/4/2017 c1 104Alibi Nonsense
That was so fluffy and lovely and adorable and I loved it! Especially all the hugs, and the description of sleep at the end. Fantastic. A sweet little piece.
4/30/2017 c1 Mee
3 Cute
3/6/2017 c1 Shadow Hedgi
Awwwwwww so cute! *favs*
5/29/2016 c1 2Unidentified Gem
CUTE
5/9/2014 c1 25Toadettegirl2012
aww sweet big sister love!
1/22/2013 c1 Laurie
You have a good handle on the siblings, I think. In this and your Kankuro story, Path of Sand, you did a good job showing just how much they've grown into a biggest flaw is misusing words. A conscience is your sense of right and wrong, you meant Gaara to speak of losing consciousness. You did the same thing once or twice in Path of Sand. You're a good storyteller. If you want professionals to give you a chance, proofread and check yourself with a dictionary if you aren't sure. Then editors can focus on the story and not declare you too amateur to take a risk on. Good luck with your writing!
11/3/2012 c1 Rasengan 918
So sweet!
8/13/2012 c1 DarkAngelGirl
Man,I wish my siblings love me as much but Hell will freeze and Heaven will catch fire before that happens...
4/6/2012 c1 Prince Pierre
that's a sibling's love for you,gaara-sama!
2/16/2012 c1 42Shiary
i loved it it is perfect
2/2/2012 c1 7xmxoxoxnxy
aaahhhhh this was so cute
1/27/2012 c1 Krabkrab
Actually it's "Akatsuki".
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