for When the Rain Comes2/25/2022 c1 
9Emma95
Hey, I'm pretty late to reading this, but I wanted to say you wrote Jane and Lisbon really well and quite believably. You say you didn't edit this, but it looks pretty polished and well-written to me. I know this is like an 11 years old story and you're probably in a different place mentally than when you wrote it but if you ever decide to update it, you've got yourself a reader :)
9Emma95Hey, I'm pretty late to reading this, but I wanted to say you wrote Jane and Lisbon really well and quite believably. You say you didn't edit this, but it looks pretty polished and well-written to me. I know this is like an 11 years old story and you're probably in a different place mentally than when you wrote it but if you ever decide to update it, you've got yourself a reader :)
9/24/2014 c1 10coldweathergal
I'm kind of glad you didn't continue this. I works almost perfectly as it stands.
10coldweathergalI'm kind of glad you didn't continue this. I works almost perfectly as it stands.
12/3/2012 c1 16HannahbananaJane
Please continue this. Seriously! It's really, really good! I don't know if you even still get on Fanfiction, but if you do, can you please continue this? Or PM me to tell you that you aren't going to continue it.
16HannahbananaJanePlease continue this. Seriously! It's really, really good! I don't know if you even still get on Fanfiction, but if you do, can you please continue this? Or PM me to tell you that you aren't going to continue it.
12/21/2011 c1 Flicka
Glad to know this is going to be continued, it was lovely. Pain and love always the great mix for these two. All I can do is cross my fingers for a quick update.
Glad to know this is going to be continued, it was lovely. Pain and love always the great mix for these two. All I can do is cross my fingers for a quick update.