for Meet Kagome5/8/2013 c1 Akitorai
Dammit! Why women!...Man...Which ever you are. Why you no Make a few more chapters? D:
Oh well... Nice one-shot?
Dammit! Why women!...Man...Which ever you are. Why you no Make a few more chapters? D:
Oh well... Nice one-shot?
11/7/2012 c2 
5Chouko-Asai
No offense but it does not sound finished to me maybe you could make it a bit longer and have a pairing or two
5Chouko-AsaiNo offense but it does not sound finished to me maybe you could make it a bit longer and have a pairing or two
7/29/2012 c2 xXLunarRayneXx
oh well it would have been great to continue but it was a really good short story
oh well it would have been great to continue but it was a really good short story
3/31/2012 c2 yue moon
DAMM! WHY
DAMM! WHY
3/31/2012 c1 DragonFire Princess
Love the story, Hope you'll uploads the story soon, I want to know what happen next in the story. So Please update the story ASAP.
When will you continue this story?
I want to know what will happen next in the story.
Love the story, Hope you'll uploads the story soon, I want to know what happen next in the story. So Please update the story ASAP.
When will you continue this story?
I want to know what will happen next in the story.
3/29/2012 c1 Silver Moon Miko Light
HOW COULD YOU!This is the best stiry i ever ready in a month so how,why are you not adding on this story.(crys so hard it could fill the ocean)please go on...fro me your best fan.Ok MystiousMeadowByTheWaterfall
HOW COULD YOU!This is the best stiry i ever ready in a month so how,why are you not adding on this story.(crys so hard it could fill the ocean)please go on...fro me your best fan.Ok MystiousMeadowByTheWaterfall
3/25/2012 c1 Midnight Silver Moon
You did a fantastic job,keep it up i want to read every single word in the story,it so cool and good too,i can't wait for the other chapters.~.~love ya in a friendly way
You did a fantastic job,keep it up i want to read every single word in the story,it so cool and good too,i can't wait for the other chapters.~.~love ya in a friendly way
12/21/2011 c1 deebeth89
I like it overall, wish there was more since you said this is all there is & it raises more questions than it answers. 2 slight corrections for the 1st sentence, SDF not STF (Spirit Defence Force) & at the end, rouge = blush (make-up), rogue is the word you wanted. Umm Sensuie is also slightly incorrect, it's spelled Sensui no e. Here's a fairly decent info site on YYH characters, it does have a few goofs like misspelling Kurama's & his mother's family name, they're off by 1 letter; http:/www.pojo.com/yuyu/bios/a.shtml there are others & they're easy to Google if you aren't sure of a spelling or something. In the last sentence you're missing an i in like & you have you're which is the wrong form. Contractions are the combining of 2 words like you are or it is, so if that word combo doesn't work it doesn't go in the sentence, you wanted your as in belonging to you.
I like it overall, wish there was more since you said this is all there is & it raises more questions than it answers. 2 slight corrections for the 1st sentence, SDF not STF (Spirit Defence Force) & at the end, rouge = blush (make-up), rogue is the word you wanted. Umm Sensuie is also slightly incorrect, it's spelled Sensui no e. Here's a fairly decent info site on YYH characters, it does have a few goofs like misspelling Kurama's & his mother's family name, they're off by 1 letter; http:/www.pojo.com/yuyu/bios/a.shtml there are others & they're easy to Google if you aren't sure of a spelling or something. In the last sentence you're missing an i in like & you have you're which is the wrong form. Contractions are the combining of 2 words like you are or it is, so if that word combo doesn't work it doesn't go in the sentence, you wanted your as in belonging to you.