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3/31/2014 c2 Guest
I shouldn't even try should I?
1/30/2012 c2 7StardustAndShadowWings
Love the story, but you might want to make the chapters longer, and work with the characters more. Right now it seems like you are just rushing to get through with this, instead of having a 'story'.

Drink Chai, Live Life, Love Fax.

~Stardust
1/14/2012 c2 1scarlet.ride
This is really good! Keep writing!
12/23/2011 c2 BookWorm2011
loved it! :)
12/23/2011 c2 1The Shuiro Amaya
Hi! A person reviewing here!

Can you make the chappies longer? PLEASE? *bambi eyes* Every time there's an update, there's hardly anything. :(

Well, there's SOMETHING, but compared to some of the chapters I've seen, this is EXTREMELY short.

Otherwise, nice plot line, GREAT description, and nice word choice! XD I had to put a group of three there, didn't I?

KEEP UPDATING!

~Amaya
12/22/2011 c1 my blog is better than yours
This is awesome! I was wondering if I could be your beta, because I love your story, but it's short. Please PM me 2 answer! I love the idea also, it's very original!
12/22/2011 c1 1Flubber Butt Buddies FOREVA
This is an awesome story! u need to update now!
12/21/2011 c1 5IggyandMe
I really like it a lot, but the chapters have to be longer please! Love it !

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