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1/5/2012 c2 3Pink Star Art
This was a wonderful story! I liked how you listed Mello's reactions with the time, like in a real experiment, as part of Matt's notes. But I was a little confused b/c you said that they had dinner, and then in the notes Mello didn't eat his dinner. The 1st chapter didn't seem to contain any errors, but the epilogue had a few grammatical errors. Other than that, I absolutely loved this story! It was very entertaining, funny, and realistic too! Keep up the good work!
12/22/2011 c1 3Black-Phoenix-94
That's so cute, and for once it isn't about a romance between mat and mello, those annoy me, Matt, mello and near are my faves, and I love this story, you should write more about them two, again that was a cute/funny story and the characters were very in character :)

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