for The Champion11/23/2022 c34 ruth hammond
This is a wonderful chapter. There is bad, but then there is really good-good parts...I have been married for over 50 years and still have wonders if there were good things in having a second mate.
This is a wonderful chapter. There is bad, but then there is really good-good parts...I have been married for over 50 years and still have wonders if there were good things in having a second mate.
5/12/2022 c3 Jack
How many morons make the same mistake? Here is a story plus a Spartan. Now add Gaia. Now add who the fuck ever. If you cant think of a good enough story, just add more bullshit! That always works!
How many morons make the same mistake? Here is a story plus a Spartan. Now add Gaia. Now add who the fuck ever. If you cant think of a good enough story, just add more bullshit! That always works!
4/23/2022 c1 mr1980rivera
I enjoy reading the stories I hope he or she comes back and puts up a new one soon does the author page say whether he's a man or woman oh well I hope they are well and I having a good life may whatever God you believe in bless you all
I enjoy reading the stories I hope he or she comes back and puts up a new one soon does the author page say whether he's a man or woman oh well I hope they are well and I having a good life may whatever God you believe in bless you all
3/14/2022 c42 
3Fyr RedNight
This was a really sweet, endearing, beautiful and absolutely entertaining story.
Thank you so much for sharing this with us!
3Fyr RedNightThis was a really sweet, endearing, beautiful and absolutely entertaining story.
Thank you so much for sharing this with us!
1/27/2022 c6 Mastersgtjames
Feel like one of his activated abilities should have been an understanding of languages, like AllSpeak. I mean, he was ALREADY on another planet when they(God and Gaia) activated his powers.
Feel like one of his activated abilities should have been an understanding of languages, like AllSpeak. I mean, he was ALREADY on another planet when they(God and Gaia) activated his powers.
1/27/2022 c5 Mastersgtjames
Might want to go back over this story for editing. I think some characters did not translate right. You keep having words like emthis/em.
Kinda want you to make sequels or omakes to this story. Champion Xander in other universes. Him in Marvel, in DC, in Harry Potter, etc...
Might want to go back over this story for editing. I think some characters did not translate right. You keep having words like emthis/em.
Kinda want you to make sequels or omakes to this story. Champion Xander in other universes. Him in Marvel, in DC, in Harry Potter, etc...
1/26/2022 c1 Mastersgtjames
Bummer... I mean, I like Halo, but with the Title of this, I was kinda hopeful the MC would wind up being someone else. Like, maybe Alexander: Protector of Man? Or the Emperor of Mankind? Maybe even MasterChief.
Bummer... I mean, I like Halo, but with the Title of this, I was kinda hopeful the MC would wind up being someone else. Like, maybe Alexander: Protector of Man? Or the Emperor of Mankind? Maybe even MasterChief.
10/6/2021 c36 ShadowHurricane
How did they knock out Oz ? He was in full armor and we seen Xander get zatted with no effect before so ... how ?
How did they knock out Oz ? He was in full armor and we seen Xander get zatted with no effect before so ... how ?