for Potter's Protector9/12 c45 Rudo the Barbarian Hero
This was an extremely enjoyable read. Xander and his effects (magical psychosocial and commedic) were well written, often funny and touching. Goblins, werewolves, phoenixi, other species were treated with respect and with creativity. Plot had a lovely arc, with many satisfying little arclettes. Dumbledore was a well written believable Big Bad, whose evil sprang from his egocentric and pics poor imagination; quite realistic. Resolution in final chapters was thorough, beautiful in its necessity, and I am very happy it sets up Sequel.
Thank you, author. Ya done good.
This was an extremely enjoyable read. Xander and his effects (magical psychosocial and commedic) were well written, often funny and touching. Goblins, werewolves, phoenixi, other species were treated with respect and with creativity. Plot had a lovely arc, with many satisfying little arclettes. Dumbledore was a well written believable Big Bad, whose evil sprang from his egocentric and pics poor imagination; quite realistic. Resolution in final chapters was thorough, beautiful in its necessity, and I am very happy it sets up Sequel.
Thank you, author. Ya done good.
9/1 c30 The-Morrighu
Minor errorin case youre still editing. When Voldie gets resurrected He says THIRTY years its been not THIRTEEN.
Minor errorin case youre still editing. When Voldie gets resurrected He says THIRTY years its been not THIRTEEN.
178/6 c39 nagiten
why would sirius allow them to use grimuald place aa the order base? he wouldnt trust dumbledore?
hmm let see what happens now
why would sirius allow them to use grimuald place aa the order base? he wouldnt trust dumbledore?
hmm let see what happens now
8/6 c30 nagiten
poor harry but now the war will be quick and yes it iwll be bloody but not liek it was in canon.
also run tom run for your damn live
and it was 13-15 years not thirty
poor harry but now the war will be quick and yes it iwll be bloody but not liek it was in canon.
also run tom run for your damn live
and it was 13-15 years not thirty
8/6 c29 nagiten
why would been r2 be a punishment? in my mind been 3po would be more of a punishment for xander
poor xan
why would been r2 be a punishment? in my mind been 3po would be more of a punishment for xander
poor xan
8/6 c28 nagiten
how was rita getting in with so much protection around the school joyce active a shit ton of enhanced senses and wards up?
so now they come up with this? why didnt they do so earlier have a map that warns of unauthorize entry? you would think the moment xander learnt of the map he would made more and a larger more powerful one linked to the smaller ones
how was rita getting in with so much protection around the school joyce active a shit ton of enhanced senses and wards up?
so now they come up with this? why didnt they do so earlier have a map that warns of unauthorize entry? you would think the moment xander learnt of the map he would made more and a larger more powerful one linked to the smaller ones
8/6 c20 nagiten
hmm i thought hogwart was sovereign ground and couldnt be touched by ministry laws more so now with xander as goblin king?
hmm i thought hogwart was sovereign ground and couldnt be touched by ministry laws more so now with xander as goblin king?
8/6 c17 nagiten
so why didnt or hasnt harry used his trick of waking people to bring the longbottoms back?
so why didnt or hasnt harry used his trick of waking people to bring the longbottoms back?
8/6 c15 nagiten
they were told riddle was voldemort so why is harry asking why tom cares about Voldemort?
hmm let see what happens now with more of dumbledores secrets out in the open
they were told riddle was voldemort so why is harry asking why tom cares about Voldemort?
hmm let see what happens now with more of dumbledores secrets out in the open
8/5 c14 nagiten
why didnt they just sent harry in as a slytherin while theo ther areu nder the cloak? sure he thought of the shifting later but still unlike canon they have adults they can trust and that will help them they didnt have to waste time also why havent they caught peter yet? joyce and xander should be able to find him no problem also why havent the twins mentioned the map to xander ?
also will xander realises the tom hagrid mentioned was tom riddle?
why didnt they just sent harry in as a slytherin while theo ther areu nder the cloak? sure he thought of the shifting later but still unlike canon they have adults they can trust and that will help them they didnt have to waste time also why havent they caught peter yet? joyce and xander should be able to find him no problem also why havent the twins mentioned the map to xander ?
also will xander realises the tom hagrid mentioned was tom riddle?
8/5 c12 nagiten
why cant xander tell lockhart lying? also why hasnt harry clicked it parseltongue he hearing?
hmm stupid claws dont piss off a dragon it your damn motto and you have two before you
why cant xander tell lockhart lying? also why hasnt harry clicked it parseltongue he hearing?
hmm stupid claws dont piss off a dragon it your damn motto and you have two before you