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6/28/2014 c5 SaturatedFat
I'd always prefer good endings for kyouten.
6/28/2014 c4 SaturatedFat
T _ T Tsurugi, you really shouldn't be so mean towards the innocent boy...
5/30/2013 c4 Guest
i want to know what happens in the funeral!
5/19/2013 c4 Guest
did tenma die?
5/17/2013 c5 Guest
you know... the bad ending was better... :T
11/28/2012 c5 Chin Suginei
...You're evil. ._. Wash away the horrors... *reads the good ending over and over again to cover up the shock from the bad ending*
11/7/2012 c4 49Shiranai Atsune
What did it mean '-for the last time'?
8/20/2012 c5 16shiroi white-phoenix
Terumi Aoi: It's... O/./O really a happy ending...But I glad Tenma-kun didn't get hit.
Of course. Glad to Tsurugi was there. Now I know how Tenma get hit at the bad ending. I like when the Tsurugi stunned! I think that's why he cried at the bad ending...
Terumi Aoi: A-ano, Shiro-chan, you only talk the bad ending one...
OAO I even didn't notice! GREAT STORY! 5 thumb up for this! X3
8/20/2012 c4 shiroi white-phoenix
As I promised, I read this first then the next one...
TTTT I CRIED! In my head there's a picture or a movie about this one. I think you won't mind if I...Um, sort of followed this ending in my fanfic about KyouTenma, will you? But this chapter (that I know if there's anybody will say like I do) GREAT!
Terumi Aoi: (tear dropped from her eye)
Wack! A-aoi?
Terumi Aoi: (wiped off her tears) It's... too sad...
I know that Aoi. Now you can stop crying- EEP!
8/20/2012 c3 shiroi white-phoenix
Ano, what's wrong with the bad ending? I'm freaking curious now, but feel bad feelings either. Anyway, my Terumi Aoi want to saw something to Tsurugi if you allowed. I think it's better I announce it when I write these both fanfic. Poor Tenma, he must be shocked and thanks to that bad-guy-soccerteam-friend Kyousuke. If I can I want to kill him but know Tenma and Yuuichi won't allow me to, I think it could be a warning for him. I'm going to read the bad one then the good one, I guess...
8/20/2012 c2 shiroi white-phoenix
... Maybe I have a comment for this...
Tsurugi Kyousuke! I'm gonna crush you! I'm gonna tear you apart! Then throw it to the lions! Then I'll throw your bones to the volcano! And then I'll use the burning bones into torch of the grave! Hosh...hosh...huff...huff...
I'm freaking mad and angry when he broke Tenma's PURE HEART! Sigh... I must admit that was Tsurugi; completely opposite from his brother, Yuuichi. I hope there's a good ending of this story...
8/20/2012 c1 shiroi white-phoenix
BWAHAHAHAHA! I can't stop laughing if I remembered again how Tsurugi and Tenma have a fight like that one! Bwahahaha! But for the Christmas? I know Tsurugi want to be alone with his brother at that day...
Terumi Aoi: But, isn't it nice to spend the Christmas with family and friends?
Yay! Right you are Aoi! You're my best OC! Anyway can I mad to Tsurugi? Because I going to kill him when he let Tenma alone with A-M-E-M-I-Y-A T-A-I-Y-O-U! I hate TaiTenma because I like more KyouTenma than TaiTenma! Anyway, update! :D
5/27/2012 c5 8RyuuseiDragonPenguin
I really love this story, but why... Why do you ALWAYS kill Tenma? Never mind, your stories are always fantastic. I preferred the happy ending, duh, but both were really well written. Love how all characters are very IC, and the plot is great. Good work! :D
1/4/2012 c4 DutchWreck
... why did I even click the bad ending? Kidou: because you can't handle sweet endings... ELle: o, yeah, good point... Anyway, good story! I really liked it! Good job.
1/3/2012 c5 52Amulet Misty
Yay happy ending xD I have to admit I read the sad ending as well...I was like 'nuuu Tenma' xD Loved this fic 3 Merry Late Christmas!
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