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10/17/2013 c10 gamemanj
Second to last review for today,and I have one question on my mind.
Why on earth would they want to do...a certain thing every friday,knowing it could cause pregnancy?
It dosen't make the whole "Leo is so,so,so surprised" stuff...
Other than that,and why Shannon wasn't in for a serious amount of facial damage,it's all good...
end of line.
8/28/2013 c10 Nate
I wish you would re do this and put what happened in between the epilogue so the story would be longer
7/13/2013 c10 3Deep Sea Anchor
This is, without a doubt, not the ending I anticipated.
But, I rather like it, more that the ending I originally suspected, actually.

It's been some time, but I feel this was a satisfying end to a nice story.
Much like the romance portrayed between Leo and Aeris, it has flaws, but in all it's still a fine story.

As usual, I look forward to more from you Mister Matt.
6/27/2013 c10 PhillGood
I love this story even through it's "unique" set of twists and turns and even though I personally would of done some things different I still greatly enjoyed it and hope to see more from you in the future, great job, blah blah blah, you get my point.

sincerely- ;)
6/19/2013 c10 Guest
Ur 1 of my favorite author on fanfics probly second or better thn ramona bandicoot its hard to choose
6/16/2013 c10 8Phemon13
BEST. ENDING. EVER. I'M SERIOUS. MY MOST AWESOME DREAMS HAVE BEEN ANSWERED
I tip my exceedingly large hat to you!
Awesome job!
6/14/2013 c9 Guest
About you get to feral i hope you finish it fast
6/10/2013 c9 Phemon13
*falls over in a fit of laughter* BEST CLIFFHANGER EVER!
Also, awesome that you're continuing this! I am LOVING the continuation! Keep up the awkwardness!
3/11/2013 c2 AmethystFoxy
Well well well, this story may be a bit strange but I am kind of enjoying it in a Wierd way. I always wondered what it would be like to have Leo and Aris get together, but not like that. When I first read the title I thought this was a love story expanding off of the comic where Leo buys Aris dungeon guy two for Christmas. Well, keep up the good work _.

-TheTimeIsNigh
12/17/2012 c8 CrewSoulReaper
actually pretty good, although the ending with leo and aeris, coulda ended on a lighter note. maybe at least some smiles or some i love you's
12/11/2012 c1 2EdgarAerisPoe
This was a great story! Keep up the good work!
11/29/2012 c8 Guest
Glad to see an update! :3
11/26/2012 c8 155th Dimension
[building. When the

doors opened, she was slightly surprised]- I don't think you meant to break this into two different paragraphs mid-sentence.

I like the "HAHA-no" you added on the end. It's so... contrary that it's funny.

A good chapter. Not sure if you're planning on one more, but I will say that as far as endings go, this would do fine.

Finally, the break in tension. This kind of "lock 'em in a room together" plan actually seems to work well... so long as the only issues stem from miscommunication.
11/23/2012 c8 2V-Zhan
Y'know, i kinda wonders will you make a sequel to this fic? 'cause this is awesomely hilarious. Definitely worth the wait.
11/22/2012 c8 7Zero612
I have no idea how long its been since you've updated this.

Delta: Doesnt matter had se-

Quiet you!
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