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1/1/2020 c1 darcy
You really have captured their voice and mannerisms well.

I hadn't really seen Murdoch as a dom and Julia as a sub before; I would have thought it would be the reverse. So that was a new thing for me to read.

I think you might have too much internal monologue - too much about what the characters are thinking. Your descriptions of actions are very good.
9/21/2014 c1 Guest
but like she even said in one of the episodes that she still goes by Dr. Ogden and Murdoch goes back to station house number four, and what about Dr. grace?
12/26/2013 c1 3Natmuread
i like this... make more! or continue!
6/16/2012 c1 3Annie Targaryen
Keep writing! I love it :)
5/23/2012 c1 2Okalin
Very warm story ! :o)

I'm not capable of writing that kind of stories but no need, you do it so well !

I must say that my english is not good enough to understand all of you want to say, if it was maybe I would be more impressed by your boldness (I hope it's the good word ! lol).

Continue !
1/8/2012 c1 murdochfan
great story - please write more, this has legs!
12/26/2011 c1 84JuliaJoyBell
I like it :)

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