for A Very Mercer Christmas1/10/2012 c9 
3RTM
Okay, this fic is absolutely hilarious. Also, for some reason I'm imagining a Blackwatch mook being a messenger and telling Mercer that they want a truce or whatever for Christmas... :D
Anyway, sadly I can't give any well rounded critique, because as far as I can see, everything is good enough for me.
3RTMOkay, this fic is absolutely hilarious. Also, for some reason I'm imagining a Blackwatch mook being a messenger and telling Mercer that they want a truce or whatever for Christmas... :D
Anyway, sadly I can't give any well rounded critique, because as far as I can see, everything is good enough for me.
1/3/2012 c8 11Laluzi
Rofl! Never thought of that one, but yeah, that's part of his body. That'll teach him to leave parts of himself lying around. :P
Btw, loved the Ragland vs. Shiraz thing. I do wonder how Jennifer and Alex themselves got along at the dinner, though.
11LaluziRofl! Never thought of that one, but yeah, that's part of his body. That'll teach him to leave parts of himself lying around. :P
Btw, loved the Ragland vs. Shiraz thing. I do wonder how Jennifer and Alex themselves got along at the dinner, though.
12/30/2011 c6 1Fictiondevourer
The possibilities for humor are endless in this setting.
Please keep it up.
1FictiondevourerThe possibilities for humor are endless in this setting.
Please keep it up.
12/28/2011 c5 11Laluzi
Heh, loved it. Can't wait for the omake.
And of course, he got the tree there. xD
11LaluziHeh, loved it. Can't wait for the omake.
And of course, he got the tree there. xD
12/27/2011 c3 Asuperguy
Sweet crossover. Alex cutting the ham in half with the Blade power was funny as heck XD.
Sweet crossover. Alex cutting the ham in half with the Blade power was funny as heck XD.
12/26/2011 c4 14DarkGidora
You already know my thoughts on the previous chapters, so I'll just say I'm enjoying where this is going. Any chance of Tony Stark getting involved?
With that said, I would recommend doing something about the bbcode and FFnet stripped out the dashes which served to distinguish POV shifts; you can edit the chapters and insert horizontal lines for the POV shifts in the Document Manager.
14DarkGidoraYou already know my thoughts on the previous chapters, so I'll just say I'm enjoying where this is going. Any chance of Tony Stark getting involved?
With that said, I would recommend doing something about the bbcode and FFnet stripped out the dashes which served to distinguish POV shifts; you can edit the chapters and insert horizontal lines for the POV shifts in the Document Manager.