
7/4/2012 c20 omega two
Well, for some reason I felt the urge to go and read all the reviews I ever wrote. I realized how lacking I was on this story and decided to come post a longer review!
So this story was great. A lot of it made NO sense at ALL, but that's mostly because I know you well enough to see things that wouldn't happen. I also know how far apart we lived...it's farther now. For normal people it would be fine.
Poor kid who cant pee standing up.
And finally, I hate you for making me stay up unroll 1:30 am :/ I need to wake up at 6:45 tomorr...this morning, you douchebag! Immunity was good, but something tells me it won't be worth passing out while I'm trying to lay hardwood
Well, for some reason I felt the urge to go and read all the reviews I ever wrote. I realized how lacking I was on this story and decided to come post a longer review!
So this story was great. A lot of it made NO sense at ALL, but that's mostly because I know you well enough to see things that wouldn't happen. I also know how far apart we lived...it's farther now. For normal people it would be fine.
Poor kid who cant pee standing up.
And finally, I hate you for making me stay up unroll 1:30 am :/ I need to wake up at 6:45 tomorr...this morning, you douchebag! Immunity was good, but something tells me it won't be worth passing out while I'm trying to lay hardwood
3/25/2012 c20
10x Cellie-chan x
Wow, nice job! Mack's character is very well developed, as well as the plot to this story. It's well put together. Nice job! :3
~Celestt

Wow, nice job! Mack's character is very well developed, as well as the plot to this story. It's well put together. Nice job! :3
~Celestt
3/15/2012 c1 x Cellie-chan x
Interesting. You really pullrd me into the story. It took me a moment to figure out who`s POV this was in, but after that, it was incredibly interesting and well written. It seems as if you put alot of effort into the plot. For that I congradjulate you. Keep writin'!
Interesting. You really pullrd me into the story. It took me a moment to figure out who`s POV this was in, but after that, it was incredibly interesting and well written. It seems as if you put alot of effort into the plot. For that I congradjulate you. Keep writin'!
1/24/2012 c15 omega two
That was a pretty cool fight scene. I have waaay more combative skills than a sophomore really should...
That was a pretty cool fight scene. I have waaay more combative skills than a sophomore really should...