for Help!6/21/2012 c37 NoLongerValid2022
9th! You must be a brill cheerleader! I can't believe the next chapter is the last, even though I know they're is a sequel!
9th! You must be a brill cheerleader! I can't believe the next chapter is the last, even though I know they're is a sequel!
6/20/2012 c16 NoLongerValid2022
MissLozzieB is like one of my best friends (we attend the same school and are in each other's classes)! But she never seems to say that word! Xxx
MissLozzieB is like one of my best friends (we attend the same school and are in each other's classes)! But she never seems to say that word! Xxx
6/20/2012 c15 NoLongerValid2022
My grandad does the same! Loving the story so far (I'm reading it on my phone whilst watching NCIS).
My grandad does the same! Loving the story so far (I'm reading it on my phone whilst watching NCIS).
6/10/2012 c33 Bshdjjfo
I think as names for the twins could be caitlin(memory of kate) and jennifer,jenny,jen(memory of jenny shepard).if u dont like them there is always michelle from season six
I think as names for the twins could be caitlin(memory of kate) and jennifer,jenny,jen(memory of jenny shepard).if u dont like them there is always michelle from season six
5/11/2012 c25 ZivaDavid2108
Can u please please please call one of the girls Phoebe? It means bright moon I thought It would be like the bright side of the story?
Can u please please please call one of the girls Phoebe? It means bright moon I thought It would be like the bright side of the story?
5/5/2012 c38 
1conservativegirl
Good chapter :) and I know, the Tiva was subtle, but definitely there.
idk if you watch NCIS: LA but the DENSI-ness of next week's episode is overwhelming!
1conservativegirlGood chapter :) and I know, the Tiva was subtle, but definitely there.
idk if you watch NCIS: LA but the DENSI-ness of next week's episode is overwhelming!
5/4/2012 c38 4Cranjis McBasketball II
Awww! What a great chapter :) So happy for Tony and Ziva. Too bad this is possibly the last chap :( Oh well, I can't wait for the sequel! :D
4Cranjis McBasketball IIAwww! What a great chapter :) So happy for Tony and Ziva. Too bad this is possibly the last chap :( Oh well, I can't wait for the sequel! :D
4/30/2012 c37 Cranjis McBasketball II
So glad you updated! I loved this chapter! I loved all of it, but I mostly love the ending. And how you even threw the waitress into the mix. I thought that was hilarious lol :) Great chapter, I can't wait for the next :)
So glad you updated! I loved this chapter! I loved all of it, but I mostly love the ending. And how you even threw the waitress into the mix. I thought that was hilarious lol :) Great chapter, I can't wait for the next :)
4/30/2012 c37 1conservativegirl
Aww, sweet! But it can't end! Please at least do an epilogue for the twins :)
1conservativegirlAww, sweet! But it can't end! Please at least do an epilogue for the twins :)