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2/25/2012 c9 1VGiselleH
This has been a great story to read so far. I love how it reads so believable, including the alternate timeline you have created. I can totally hear Rossi and Gideon talking in their own voices, lol.
2/24/2012 c9 23Khanlock Holmes
Totally wanna hug lil Spencer right now. Can't wait for more ^_^
2/24/2012 c9 36charmony
Ha Ha! We make an awesome team! :D

That has got to be one of the best 'filler' chapters I have ever read. It had little of everything the story was about and paced really well.

Again, I'm really proud to be your beta cause this is a really nice piece of work.

Have an amazing vacation my darling and I'll look forward to working with you again soon.

Much love always,

Naomi

xoxoxox
2/22/2012 c8 16What You See in the Shadows
Well, just found this story and I have to say so far so good. Well written with good characterizations. I like your portrayal of Gideon and feel your handling of young Spencer is very real. Cant wait for more.
2/22/2012 c8 What You See in the Shadows
Well, just found this story and I have to say so far so good. Well written with good characterizations. I like your portrayal of Gideon and feel your handling of young Spencer is very real. Cant wait for more.
2/22/2012 c8 5bella-chan16
this story is amazing i can't wait for your next update.

Hearts

-Bella
2/21/2012 c8 36charmony
Okay, so I am loving all the little twists and turns you're throwing into this story and this is so far my favourite chapter. You handled it so beautifully, with Spencer's panic over having to say again what happened to him and then showing Trish's fiercely maternal side when he is being attacked by the snooty lady while sitting on the plane.

I know, I know; I already knew what was coming when you posted this, but I really enjoyed reading it through a second time without having to look for edits.

Well, there isn't a single part of me that doesn't want to know what happens next now (you have me well and truly hook, line and sinker), so no getting lost at sea while you're away. You need to eventually come back and finish this. ;)

Brilliant work darling and I do feel so incredibly privileged to not only be working on this with you, but to be able to call you sister and friend.

Lots of love,

Naomi
2/21/2012 c8 3reina13
love it
2/21/2012 c8 Sue1313
This is very good. I look forward to more.
2/21/2012 c8 lpearson
Love this story. Please continue. Thanks for writing this.
2/12/2012 c7 18Whatif-ifonly
Poor Spencer - he has a long road ahead of him. Thank goodness he has Gideon to help him... I'm interested to see how far into the future you plan on going... And I must say you continue to amaze me with how well you are really making this very believable - especially with such a difficult subject matter. Great job!
2/9/2012 c7 3reina13
love it
2/8/2012 c7 2pipinheart
Ah...This was a very beautiful piece. I love seeing Gideon with Spencer and comforting him. He is very suited being a father, and helping Spencer with the terror he has been through.

Can't wait for more.
2/8/2012 c7 36charmony
Knowing your frustrations at the moment, I am sending this review through in the hopes that it will help you to find your lovely smile again. I'm also sending it through because I love your work. :)

My lovely, this final edit was amazing! The tweaking is all entirely worth it because it just flowed so beautifully and even that paragraph just fit right in to the overall flow of the story.

I continue to be proud to be your beta and thoroughly delighted to call you sister and friend.

Wonderful job my darling. Loved this and love you.

Naomi
2/2/2012 c6 3reina13
love it
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