for First reactions12/30/2011 c1 
10hybridphoenix
It would be better if the whole thing were properly punctuated, and the Yusuf stanza doesn't seem to make sense, but on the whole, good job, this made me laugh out loud as well! I found the Eames one the funniest.
10hybridphoenixIt would be better if the whole thing were properly punctuated, and the Yusuf stanza doesn't seem to make sense, but on the whole, good job, this made me laugh out loud as well! I found the Eames one the funniest.