
6/16/2017 c1
1Worth1
what
in
da
world
whaaaaaaaaaat
how can erik be so bad
dieeeeeeeeeeeeeee
charles is nice

what
in
da
world
whaaaaaaaaaat
how can erik be so bad
dieeeeeeeeeeeeeee
charles is nice
5/1/2013 c1 Guest
It's too unorganized with a large dose of scrambles thoughts. I think it's all over the place, suddenly the problem hits like a ton of bricks from nowhere. But I like how you've made them fear society, after all it is pre-stonewall which makes being queer difficult. Although I believe homosexuals were in camp with the jews, Erik doesn't confirm to society's rules anymore he hates what he exprienced so I have this head canon that Charles would feel discomfort and everything while Erik has disbelief and something along the lines of "Why? How? What does he see?" Overall, I like the idea - a bit more tweaking but it's an okay read.
It's too unorganized with a large dose of scrambles thoughts. I think it's all over the place, suddenly the problem hits like a ton of bricks from nowhere. But I like how you've made them fear society, after all it is pre-stonewall which makes being queer difficult. Although I believe homosexuals were in camp with the jews, Erik doesn't confirm to society's rules anymore he hates what he exprienced so I have this head canon that Charles would feel discomfort and everything while Erik has disbelief and something along the lines of "Why? How? What does he see?" Overall, I like the idea - a bit more tweaking but it's an okay read.