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6/16/2017 c1 1Worth1
what
in
da
world
whaaaaaaaaaat
how can erik be so bad
dieeeeeeeeeeeeeee
charles is nice
5/1/2013 c1 Guest
It's too unorganized with a large dose of scrambles thoughts. I think it's all over the place, suddenly the problem hits like a ton of bricks from nowhere. But I like how you've made them fear society, after all it is pre-stonewall which makes being queer difficult. Although I believe homosexuals were in camp with the jews, Erik doesn't confirm to society's rules anymore he hates what he exprienced so I have this head canon that Charles would feel discomfort and everything while Erik has disbelief and something along the lines of "Why? How? What does he see?" Overall, I like the idea - a bit more tweaking but it's an okay read.
1/24/2013 c1 70Whirlwind421
Interesting story. Poor Charles. He needs a hug!
3/8/2012 c1 5random4ever
Beautiful.

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