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10/29/2013 c1 6watlocked
Good story - very well done for English not being your native tongue. The emotional dynamics in this are very strong, even though it is short. Short and sweet. I like it.
4/28/2012 c1 132Beckydaspatz
As the brothers learnt to carry on without each other, cold lonely nights just went on and on, soundlessly pulling their hearts and souls further apart within the darkness.-Wow, that's heartbreaking! Wonderful job for your first drabble, I hope this will be your first of many! :D
3/12/2012 c1 212DeansBabyBird
Hi Rosetta.

Well done on your first drabble. It's full of complex emotion and has a wistful sadness about it.

well done especially as English is not your first language, you've done a great job.

Bev
1/1/2012 c1 34bhoney
Awww, that's so sad! I hate to think of the boys separated like that. Congrats on hitting 100 words, exactly-I know it's hard to do!

Happy New Year!

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