for A New Dance7/28/2013 c1 Guest
Haha, wow, you surely know how to make the characters out-of-character the best (:
Haha, wow, you surely know how to make the characters out-of-character the best (:
1/2/2013 c1 someone
For a oneshot this is real good. Its so funny!1 i love it! i agree with u on twilight though! i love your sence of humor! your great, keep it up
For a oneshot this is real good. Its so funny!1 i love it! i agree with u on twilight though! i love your sence of humor! your great, keep it up
8/23/2012 c1 WitchChild17
Wow, I am torn. I seriously want to laugh, but I feel so bad for Delos. He spent so much time learning that, thinking it was cool, to look just plain stupid in front of all his Day Breaker friends. To think Jez let Ash and Quinn trick him like that. Darn my conscious! Poor Delos. :(
Wow, I am torn. I seriously want to laugh, but I feel so bad for Delos. He spent so much time learning that, thinking it was cool, to look just plain stupid in front of all his Day Breaker friends. To think Jez let Ash and Quinn trick him like that. Darn my conscious! Poor Delos. :(
4/26/2012 c1 
5TaraWayland
This was really funny , the hokey pokey hahahahhahaha never would have thought of it :)
5TaraWaylandThis was really funny , the hokey pokey hahahahhahaha never would have thought of it :)
4/9/2012 c1 AwSoMeStArNeSs
HAHAH The Twilight crack! ;D Its all true!
I thought they were going to teach him the walts or something!
That was awesome! I so saw that! Made me laugh! Thanks!
HAHAH The Twilight crack! ;D Its all true!
I thought they were going to teach him the walts or something!
That was awesome! I so saw that! Made me laugh! Thanks!
2/13/2012 c1 Sam D D D D D D D D D
Really funny! nice story!
Really funny! nice story!
1/27/2012 c1 Simply Intricate
Lol this was SO funny! :) I love how Delos is so naive, he's like a little kid. :) I LOVE when adults/big kids act like little kids, don't you? ;) Keep writing!
~IHR4E 3
Lol this was SO funny! :) I love how Delos is so naive, he's like a little kid. :) I LOVE when adults/big kids act like little kids, don't you? ;) Keep writing!
~IHR4E 3
12/31/2011 c1 Hartutopia
Great story! It was really funny
+ you should do a story for each soulmate couple.
Ahh love Ash , Quinn abd Delos:)
Great story! It was really funny
+ you should do a story for each soulmate couple.
Ahh love Ash , Quinn abd Delos:)