
1/3/2012 c1
3N. E. Won
I loved it! You're portrayal of Ron was perfect. And you did a really good job sticking to Rowling's original plan. Aside from one typo ("Fleur" was spelled "Fluer" by mistake, I think), the writing was superb.

I loved it! You're portrayal of Ron was perfect. And you did a really good job sticking to Rowling's original plan. Aside from one typo ("Fleur" was spelled "Fluer" by mistake, I think), the writing was superb.
1/3/2012 c1 regbride12
That was cute and spot on with Ron's emotions and feelings for Hermione by then ;)
That was cute and spot on with Ron's emotions and feelings for Hermione by then ;)