
1/11/2012 c3
8Maxine Ridde
This is a really good story. Your characters are intune with MR and I love the story line so far. Please update soon!

This is a really good story. Your characters are intune with MR and I love the story line so far. Please update soon!
1/5/2012 c2
13Xx.BiteMeh.xX
This is very good! You don't see mch of these Flock stories anymore. They're usually Alternate Universe stories or the stories that carry on from Angel. It's great to see one about the Flock, one that carries on from the earlier books and is actually very good! I can't wait to see what the Super Soldiers turn out to be like! Update soon! :)

This is very good! You don't see mch of these Flock stories anymore. They're usually Alternate Universe stories or the stories that carry on from Angel. It's great to see one about the Flock, one that carries on from the earlier books and is actually very good! I can't wait to see what the Super Soldiers turn out to be like! Update soon! :)
1/4/2012 c2
3shadowgirl711
Pretty good! I enjoyed it. But in the first chapter, u don't have to introduce everybody. We all know the story so it was a little boring... you might want to start it with some action to draw the reader in. Just a suggestion... :) update soon!

Pretty good! I enjoyed it. But in the first chapter, u don't have to introduce everybody. We all know the story so it was a little boring... you might want to start it with some action to draw the reader in. Just a suggestion... :) update soon!