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1/10/2013 c1 lalstice
...I'm here again, Disk. Ugh, do you know how tiring this is? You slave driver.

The story is awkward. I don't know how to explain it, and it might be because it's crack, but there ya go. It's also a little cliché.
Where you say "Nono" person, it's a little confusing. And it also doesn't look grammatically correct. If you can, try to think of a different name.
Also, you're a little formal. Instead of saying 'did not', use 'don't'.
There ya go.
-sigh-
On to the next one...
6/3/2012 c1 10Hyouton Inuki
So, you should put the note that it's sequel to What if for the lazy reader (like me) :D You're really good at writing humour. Look forward to reading more your stories
4/1/2012 c1 18InsaneKAT
Brilliant. You make a great humor writer. I know, sorry about the totally late review - I THOUGHT I HAD PRESSED THE SUBMIT BUTTON!

You wanted a long one, I give you a long one.

Well, I wonder what really happened to Tsuna... and And why Vine? I thought that maybe Gin or Chianti or Sherry or Tortilla might be better : )
1/28/2012 c1 Julez Rulez
Sry 4 reading ur story now... haven't been on fanfic 4 such a loooooooooooooooong time! Anyway (like u did in this story), I still don't get the how story. :P
1/13/2012 c1 21ezcap1st
Ooh lol! This is the one where Xanxus is Tsuna's tutor huh? XD
1/6/2012 c1 40The Ice Within
Disk,

After I read this... since it's for my b'day... it feels... erm... as if i'm the vine bottle. brrrrrrrrrr. HA HA.

I never laugh at humor fics. But i liked it. a lot.

And I'm assuming the white-haired person is erm... squalo? or who? I'm a little confused.

Well done.

-icy-
1/4/2012 c1 thisisaperson
LOLLL. Hilarious. Funny, well written, and... yeah, HILARIOUS.

The story was great. I lived the ending. A little sad, though brilliantly written.

LOVE your fics. Keep on writing!

~ Mo

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