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2/15/2012 c2 7AnnaKathlyn15
wow. this is pretty good. cant wait to see more!
1/25/2012 c2 1lollipopXgal
You are doing very well :) Your story is becoming very interesting... hope u continue :D and watch out for the small errors
1/8/2012 c2 8yulian
God chapter! I am liking Ruby more and more, and I loved the scene in the garden i would have liked to see more interaction between her and the Professor, just thought. Interested in whom she will be mentored by. Good Job so far!
1/4/2012 c1 yulian
Good job so far. i like the character, cant wait to read more.
1/4/2012 c1 1lollipopXgal
So far your story is pretty good. To improve, I would say to elaborate more on the description of people and places. Also, your writing is very fast paced, I have the same problem time to time, try to focus more on expanding and editing. And don't rush it through. This is very good for the first chapter, keep writing more and you will become better :) Looking forward to your next chapter ;)

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