for As the Devil Took Hold7/24/2012 c1 
132Beckydaspatz
He could no longer phantom a reason, not even one from the past.
His brother a long forgotten memory as the devil took hold.
Wowzers! That's some powerful stuff! Nice job :D
132BeckydaspatzHe could no longer phantom a reason, not even one from the past.
His brother a long forgotten memory as the devil took hold.
Wowzers! That's some powerful stuff! Nice job :D
5/3/2012 c1 27Petersgirl2011
You should be a proud writer. This was really good. You have bright poetic side that shows. I plan on reading the rest of them. Cookies right back at ya!
27Petersgirl2011You should be a proud writer. This was really good. You have bright poetic side that shows. I plan on reading the rest of them. Cookies right back at ya!
2/15/2012 c1 Animeaddict1616
Hello, I would like to apologize for my last review. I was under the impression that you were insulting my mothers story. I mean out of 131 reviews yours was the only one with any form of negative response. I thank you for your willingness to not hate me. I'm just overprotective and need to remember that my mother can take care of herself. I'm also sorry that I can't really review your story, I have no idea what it's about. The writing is nice and you only have a few spelling errors(sorry for judging you so harshly on that). Other that that, it was lovely. Another thing my i pod doesn't let me type my stories to put them on my profile page so if your could put a side note on your next review for Unexpected Love( mom won't mind) and tell me what it's about. Thank you again. Farewell.
Hello, I would like to apologize for my last review. I was under the impression that you were insulting my mothers story. I mean out of 131 reviews yours was the only one with any form of negative response. I thank you for your willingness to not hate me. I'm just overprotective and need to remember that my mother can take care of herself. I'm also sorry that I can't really review your story, I have no idea what it's about. The writing is nice and you only have a few spelling errors(sorry for judging you so harshly on that). Other that that, it was lovely. Another thing my i pod doesn't let me type my stories to put them on my profile page so if your could put a side note on your next review for Unexpected Love( mom won't mind) and tell me what it's about. Thank you again. Farewell.
2/9/2012 c1 Animeaddict1616
I don't think it flows. It's not all that story like in my opion. It's stating everything. I don't like the story so don't get me wrong. I'm just a prick that doesn't care about your feelings. So I will tell you now Unexpected Love by Flamingpen18 is great. Get rid of your petty jealousy and learn coherence and unity, your spelling sucks and you have a repetitive way of writing. It's also non sequitur. Makes no sense what so ever, illogical, asinine and annoying. I'm a junior in highschool, 16 years old, and my private school doesn't allow such mistakes. Evaluate yourself before you go judging outside of your knowledge or area.
I don't think it flows. It's not all that story like in my opion. It's stating everything. I don't like the story so don't get me wrong. I'm just a prick that doesn't care about your feelings. So I will tell you now Unexpected Love by Flamingpen18 is great. Get rid of your petty jealousy and learn coherence and unity, your spelling sucks and you have a repetitive way of writing. It's also non sequitur. Makes no sense what so ever, illogical, asinine and annoying. I'm a junior in highschool, 16 years old, and my private school doesn't allow such mistakes. Evaluate yourself before you go judging outside of your knowledge or area.
2/9/2012 c1 Animeaddict1616
I don't think it flows. It's not all that story like in my opion. It's stating everything. I don't like the story so don't get me wrong. I'm just a prick that doesn't care about your feelings. So I will tell you now Unexpected Love by Flamingpen18 is great. Get rid of your petty jealousy and learn coherence and unity, your spelling sucks and you have a repetitive way of writing. It's also non sequitur. Makes no sense what so ever, illogical, asinine and annoying. I'm a junior in highschool, 16 years old, and my private school doesn't allow such mistakes. Evaluate yourself before you go judging outside of your knowledge or area.
I don't think it flows. It's not all that story like in my opion. It's stating everything. I don't like the story so don't get me wrong. I'm just a prick that doesn't care about your feelings. So I will tell you now Unexpected Love by Flamingpen18 is great. Get rid of your petty jealousy and learn coherence and unity, your spelling sucks and you have a repetitive way of writing. It's also non sequitur. Makes no sense what so ever, illogical, asinine and annoying. I'm a junior in highschool, 16 years old, and my private school doesn't allow such mistakes. Evaluate yourself before you go judging outside of your knowledge or area.
2/9/2012 c1 Animeaddict1616
I don't think it flows. It's not all that story like in my opion. It's stating everything. I don't like the story so don't get me wrong. I'm just a prick that doesn't care about your feelings. So I will tell you now Unexpected Love by Flamingpen18 is great. Get rid of your petty jealousy and learn coherence and unity, your spelling sucks and you have a repetitive way of writing. It's also non sequitur. Makes no sense what so ever, illogical, asinine and annoying. I'm a junior in highschool, 16 years old, and my private school doesn't allow such mistakes. Evaluate yourself before you go judging outside of your knowledge or area.
I don't think it flows. It's not all that story like in my opion. It's stating everything. I don't like the story so don't get me wrong. I'm just a prick that doesn't care about your feelings. So I will tell you now Unexpected Love by Flamingpen18 is great. Get rid of your petty jealousy and learn coherence and unity, your spelling sucks and you have a repetitive way of writing. It's also non sequitur. Makes no sense what so ever, illogical, asinine and annoying. I'm a junior in highschool, 16 years old, and my private school doesn't allow such mistakes. Evaluate yourself before you go judging outside of your knowledge or area.
1/25/2012 c1 No Longer Active Here
Oh yay I love Sam and Lucifer stories. My favourite pairing :D
Nice, yet a different perspective on Lucifer taking over Sam.
Good job!
~Aquila
Oh yay I love Sam and Lucifer stories. My favourite pairing :D
Nice, yet a different perspective on Lucifer taking over Sam.
Good job!
~Aquila