for Kill Me Now11/16/2015 c14 
6SomeoneKnew
wut. Those things... you expect me to believe that those things are faeries? Not likely. Faeries can't talk, or think, they're very vain and only useful for Christmas lights.
6SomeoneKnewwut. Those things... you expect me to believe that those things are faeries? Not likely. Faeries can't talk, or think, they're very vain and only useful for Christmas lights.
11/16/2015 c13 SomeoneKnew
Please, please say Prussia didn't sing. I beg of you. And Emily, I will hunt you down. And Moon- actually, it's not your fault. Kitty and Emily will not live long though.
Please, please say Prussia didn't sing. I beg of you. And Emily, I will hunt you down. And Moon- actually, it's not your fault. Kitty and Emily will not live long though.
11/16/2015 c10 SomeoneKnew
In section two I was happy. My mum is Chinese. And Italy, while an idiot, is adorable. This is funny. The whole thing. Except the end.
In section two I was happy. My mum is Chinese. And Italy, while an idiot, is adorable. This is funny. The whole thing. Except the end.
11/16/2015 c9 SomeoneKnew
Oh... Poor England. His brother/son (not sure which) left that day. There he is in the feels corner. I'll go join him.
Oh... Poor England. His brother/son (not sure which) left that day. There he is in the feels corner. I'll go join him.
11/16/2015 c7 SomeoneKnew
I want MochiJapan! Or any Japan! He's awesome! And a great singer! Third-favourite, right behind England and Canada! Also, I agree. KILL THE PERVERT! :)
I want MochiJapan! Or any Japan! He's awesome! And a great singer! Third-favourite, right behind England and Canada! Also, I agree. KILL THE PERVERT! :)
11/16/2015 c5 SomeoneKnew
Noooo... not the BTT... just Avada me now.
Oh BTW this seems to be shaping up like last chapter's review so enjoy my notes!
When did Prussia get here? Or am I just forgetful?
Well, is anyone not afraid of France? If so, you are mad.
I like peeps. :) Yum.
See last chapter's review, my love of your writing has not changed any.
Noooo... not the BTT... just Avada me now.
Oh BTW this seems to be shaping up like last chapter's review so enjoy my notes!
When did Prussia get here? Or am I just forgetful?
Well, is anyone not afraid of France? If so, you are mad.
I like peeps. :) Yum.
See last chapter's review, my love of your writing has not changed any.
11/16/2015 c4 SomeoneKnew
Remember how I reviewed chapter 1? It's back.
"So it's not France..." Good. That pervert gets on my nerves. Figuratively. Ick.
"These trial units include Norway, Lichtenstein..." Yay! Lichtenstein is adorabsles! And her brother is awesome! Not the greatest singer, but whatever!
I assume nothing bad happened when they opened the box.
"...showing his one fang." So.. he's a vampire? KILL IT! KILL IT WITH FIRE AND STUFF ITS HEAD WITH GARLIC AND SCATTER THE ASHES ON A RIVER! I take no chances with sparkly things. Do you know how hard it is to get glitter off your clothes?
"'No, Canada."' Agreed. He's my favourite.
"'Even more reason not to, Prussia.'" Prussia? Oh no... my ears are still bloody from his 'Marukaite Chikyuu' which is more like some guy with a vaguely German accent screaming in my ear.
"'Ok~!'" I take it back. She's not like Cerise in the least.
Overall I love your writing, as always. :)
Remember how I reviewed chapter 1? It's back.
"So it's not France..." Good. That pervert gets on my nerves. Figuratively. Ick.
"These trial units include Norway, Lichtenstein..." Yay! Lichtenstein is adorabsles! And her brother is awesome! Not the greatest singer, but whatever!
I assume nothing bad happened when they opened the box.
"...showing his one fang." So.. he's a vampire? KILL IT! KILL IT WITH FIRE AND STUFF ITS HEAD WITH GARLIC AND SCATTER THE ASHES ON A RIVER! I take no chances with sparkly things. Do you know how hard it is to get glitter off your clothes?
"'No, Canada."' Agreed. He's my favourite.
"'Even more reason not to, Prussia.'" Prussia? Oh no... my ears are still bloody from his 'Marukaite Chikyuu' which is more like some guy with a vaguely German accent screaming in my ear.
"'Ok~!'" I take it back. She's not like Cerise in the least.
Overall I love your writing, as always. :)
11/16/2015 c3 SomeoneKnew
Awesomeness chapter! I wish I were related to the Queen of England... *daydreams* That would be epic. Potterhead out. (until next chapter)
Awesomeness chapter! I wish I were related to the Queen of England... *daydreams* That would be epic. Potterhead out. (until next chapter)
11/16/2015 c2 SomeoneKnew
Oh no. Prussia? Siriusly? One of the perverts, and the worst singer. Yes, I judge people by their singing, especially Hetalia characters by their Marukaite Chikyuu. I only just stopped bleeding through my ears since the last time I heard it. :/ Imma die soon. Also, I WANT A TWIN! :D Also also, England is my second favourite! Fairly he's supposed to be tied with Canada as my favourite, but since I'm moving there ASAP I gave Canada the title as a compromise.
Oh no. Prussia? Siriusly? One of the perverts, and the worst singer. Yes, I judge people by their singing, especially Hetalia characters by their Marukaite Chikyuu. I only just stopped bleeding through my ears since the last time I heard it. :/ Imma die soon. Also, I WANT A TWIN! :D Also also, England is my second favourite! Fairly he's supposed to be tied with Canada as my favourite, but since I'm moving there ASAP I gave Canada the title as a compromise.
11/16/2015 c1 SomeoneKnew
Notes as I read:
Emily sounds cool. :)
Kitty sounds like Cerise Hood. From 'Ever After High'.
Heheheh. Hetalia reference. :)
I would question our sanity too if I were in this fic. Yes, I said 'our'. I'm a bit crazy.
Yay, Minty's here! :)
Oh no. I was hoping for someone sane, like Arthur or Matthew. Apparently I'm not so lucky.
Judging from the amount of chapters, this is hopefully complete. I've read eight fics in a row that are abandoned halfway through and it's so frustrating. Great chapter!
Notes as I read:
Emily sounds cool. :)
Kitty sounds like Cerise Hood. From 'Ever After High'.
Heheheh. Hetalia reference. :)
I would question our sanity too if I were in this fic. Yes, I said 'our'. I'm a bit crazy.
Yay, Minty's here! :)
Oh no. I was hoping for someone sane, like Arthur or Matthew. Apparently I'm not so lucky.
Judging from the amount of chapters, this is hopefully complete. I've read eight fics in a row that are abandoned halfway through and it's so frustrating. Great chapter!
8/31/2014 c12 SmallSquare
I know this is a comedy , but can you tone it down with the sensitive subjects. This is purely fiction, I know, but i can't find enjoyment when you make light of things that are really big problems for some people (e.g under age drinking). I think you might say 'what about those fics where people are murdered, like 2p and all that.' Well in those kind of stories, i only read the ones that have a reason or some kind of legitimacy. Please write less, or none at all, of things such as this, and also put a little warning or something. My overall view of this (so far) is that you seem to largely have a talent for writing crack/humor, but your characters are very dislikable. I know they need to have flaws, but they also need something that makes me want to read about them, you know? Something that makes me want to see them grow and develop. I think that, for example, Kitty seems a little '2D' for lack of better term. As in, her personality hasn't had a chance to grow. I have other stuff to say, but i don't want to hound you.
I know this is a comedy , but can you tone it down with the sensitive subjects. This is purely fiction, I know, but i can't find enjoyment when you make light of things that are really big problems for some people (e.g under age drinking). I think you might say 'what about those fics where people are murdered, like 2p and all that.' Well in those kind of stories, i only read the ones that have a reason or some kind of legitimacy. Please write less, or none at all, of things such as this, and also put a little warning or something. My overall view of this (so far) is that you seem to largely have a talent for writing crack/humor, but your characters are very dislikable. I know they need to have flaws, but they also need something that makes me want to read about them, you know? Something that makes me want to see them grow and develop. I think that, for example, Kitty seems a little '2D' for lack of better term. As in, her personality hasn't had a chance to grow. I have other stuff to say, but i don't want to hound you.